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Reviews For: The Art of Surprise

Robert Bingham
2007-08-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseLiking this story so far. Liked the confrontational interaction between Simon and Jayne, but my favorite part was when Simon out-and-out decked Jayne over his little choice of words ("Not all there but then again, she don't need to be, huh?"). Nope, Simon has definitely NOT forgotten about Ariel.
browncoat sisterspuffy
2005-03-07
ch 1,
abuseo i love this, keep it coming. i am so in love with river/Jayne ship and its so hard to get fics that they work so perfectly in. this is a great series
tori deathangel
2005-03-01
ch 1,
abusei sure hope your not planning on ending it there, cause it be a right shame, there needs to be more!
Neroli
2005-03-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is a wonderful series so far, great grasp on the charactors and I love the slowly building relationship between Jayne and River.
BadBoyLover
2005-02-27
ch 1,
abusehehe...I love these short little chapters...
Sayra Louise
2005-02-25
ch 1,
abuseHeya. Loving the series. Will keep an eye out for more.

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hereswith
2005-02-25
ch 1,
abuseHeh! Very nice chapter, I can just picture Simon acting like that, and Jayne is being, well, Jayne :-)
Sam Fisher's Wife
2005-02-24
ch 1,
abuseI found this story very amusing. Simon puffing and huffing at Jayne, and Jayne just being good old Jayne. I think both of them were very well written. Simon's reaction to his sister being "familiar" with Jayne was as it could be expected. It's good to see the story developing.
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