 Panbuukin 2005-05-20 . chapter 1Hmm nice story definately more detailed then all my chapters put together ,but i am also amazed that you kept the views on Hobbes just like the author had. Hobbes was Hobbes and Nothing else,but I do have a question is to how exactly did Calvin and Hobbes get their powers? And what exactly is Hobbes if not just himself. It a little complexing. But its a good story and i'm just a little stumped in a few areas. Such as where did you get the last names and when are you planning to have Calvin and Hobbes arrive in Jump City. I know i just spouted a bunch of questions ,but this story left me curios and that what i like most about it. And on another note. I had an idea as to what powers Calvin and Hobbes have. Now i thought a telepathic would be nice for Calvin which you in your sttory kinda hinted. But Hobbes. I was guessing Super Speed a morphing ability nt like beast boy just from a doll to a African Tiger and super hearing. Well that was my idea ,but truly its up to you. Great story and thank you for the helpfull critisizom. |