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| FerretFelix 2005-09-11 ch 4,  | abuseThanks for the great review; there was no accident with the chunky paragraphing, it was all deliberate. That's probably because I couldn't think of where to stop. Your advice has been noted. Thanks! |
| Misty's Double 2005-07-26 ch 4, | abuseI am surprised at the quality of this story so far, I've really enjoyed it so far. =) There were a few parts that didn't seem to be of the same high quality as the majority of the story, but I understand it's not exactly possible to keep it unwavering through the whoel story. My only criticism would be that you tended to have large sections of text all clumped together... I'm pretty sure that's formatting going skew, but it would be helpful if you broke up those blocks, as I found myself losing my place a lot... yeah, I'm not as good a reader as I used to be. ;) I like how you've transformed my favourite CO (Eagle) into a true work of evil, as it works, but at the same time I don't, being an Eagle fangirl and all... still, you won't get any flames from me. This truly is one of the better works on this site, and I'll be sure to spread word of your story. =) ~Jo |
| FerretFelix 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThanks for the permission and all. I wish I'd known 'cause I could of changed it. Thanks, -Ferret Felix |
| Foulds 2005-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI, Foulds, officially give permission for the country of 'White Sun' to be used in this fic... ... ... Mainly as I wasn't the first person to use the title 'White Sun' - that was CO Mel, and I never got his permission ^_^ |
| FerretFelix 2005-04-12 ch 3, | abuseDidn't know about Hawke's Revenge, but it's too late to change it. I just made it up. Thanks for the info, though. |
| Sanity's Epitaph 2005-04-10 ch 3, | abuseWhoa... Green Earth attacking, Eagle's gone nuts/evil... Revenge has come for what Andy has not done, and it is not pretty. War is hell. Hatred is hell. And Eagle's playing Lucifer. |
| Glitcher 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuse"Rise of the White Sun"? If this the same White Sun is from Fould's fic "Hawke's Vengeance", did you ask for his permission? I see no creditting anywhere. You're in grave danger of being hunted down by lawyers, FerretFelix. |
| Sanity's Epitaph 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseSweet. Finally, someone willing to allow Andy to show his emotions! |