Very smooth an in character, lol. I like that- your depiction of Sara's... for lack of a more eloquent word, RAGE was quite Sara. The thrum and the hum of anger...

IGC t DM

Anger can be so hot when it involves yummy people...I love your stuff in case you haven't noticed LOL.

in character? sara I saw without a hitch. griss.. I don't see beeing quite quivery; blind, uncertain, yes, quivery, *I* don't see. but I agree you'd do a way better job of building characters than the writters do on an average day.

and as for ending with porn onm csi... tptb have let star trek get away with 7o9 and assorted other stuff on ent. at least your people have brains.

that was so freaking wonderful! i was like they need to have sex with her that mad! she would wear him out in five minutes and wear him down in the process! i loved it!

Geez. Haha. She's a tiger. More?

"SUNNYDALE1909: Haha blame an ulcer on a tv show.

BNLXPhile12: It's ENTIRELY possible."

Hell ya its possible. You are looking at a sixteen year old with that very problem of an ulcer with all her hard work and devotion to another television show. Gr...

But I loved this. I was thinking of doing an angry sex story with Grissom and Sara but you have beaten me to it I see.

Can't wait to see what else you come up with!

Hey, I got a freakin' *migraine* after watching "Play with Fire". -.-;;

Well...that was after I finished ranting and raving at the TV screen like the moron I was.

But oh so suggestive. ;; Cheers!

There must be a record in here somewhere...I went from totally engrossed in the story to very confused to doubled over with laughter in about 3 seconds. Nicely done.

CSI on Showtime, hmm that could be quite a lot of fun. We could start with that sequel CSINUT proposed.

oh. Nice.

I liked it, I think it is in character, and I'm so glad to see Sara find SOME way to cope, not just look wounded and wait till the next disappointment! I like all your stories, I hope you continue this, it's got lots of potential.

Now that I've gone downstairs to crank the heat DOWN in here . . . YEAH, BABY! That was perfect. Much better than the smarmy ep last week. Don't know about tonight's, but it's a safe bet that SUNNYDALE1909 is on to something.

I'd even get cable if you did!

haha nice! i love the convo at the end...evil but awesomely done!

I smell a hot monkey sex sequel... HINT HINT...

This was *so* good! (as usual.) I'm glad you made her all empowered and shit; I've had enough of everyone thinking Sara is weak and neurotic and...stuff. Rock on with the Showtime, doll, I'd so give you the show if I had the power!

I don't know if I love you or hate you. How the hell do you do it? This is beautiful I love it, it hurts me arh BIOTCH