You are doing really well. I love these stories, with the songs in them, and BOTH of them (especially Jack) admitting their feelings for each other.

love this fic really well written

nice ending!

Love it, always have. you are on my favs!

good story and the nimber of words you have written in the story is the same amount as the name of the episode 1969

You're not losing your touch you've probably just misplaced it. you've been added to my favorites list and i will read any other story that you write and post. this one was fantastic.

nice job. i don't think ur losing ur touch! i'll never think of FedEx the same way...lol! but good job.

WOW, for just 1 chapter that was really good!!

NICE! really nice! all i can say
Aligewe

Aw so cute!
Very nice. Very well written, and a good idea.

I love it!
Thanks for brightening up my day. :)
~The Twilight Writer

Excellent excellent excellent :-) I love this! It's such a cute little fic, with such a lovely moment at the end when he follows her out to the car. A great idea, and expertly written. please do keep writing more! I love your work!

Hey you! Guess what!.. Yep, I loved it. How could I not? I really need to go get that CD now, I think. It would be a good investment. I liked this. Well, before I said I loved it, so how could I demote it by saying I only liked it? I must have been mistaken on my latter statement, I *loved* it, truly!! That's funny that he "forgot" to sign the papers. Why couldn't they just fax it..not that he would actually have a fax machine. But you'd think that he would be able to answer his cell phone on his way up to the cabin. Ah well, makes for an interesting story. :)

Are you kidding, this is great! Post more soon!

i love it! its so cute and adorable. no, your not loosing your touch. its so catchy with the FedEx ending. its so cute, i personally like the touch about everybody being "so bland" once youve found your soul mate.
love it! its great!
love,
kim

I really liked it, don't stop writing! PLZ! I really like your stories!