love this story, you've captured pre-game Yuffie thoughts in a believable and interesting way.

Ohmygod, this was
gorgeous. ♥

I loved it.
Poor Yuffie.

I like the use of
repetition and
description.

` e. k us u

... o_O;
again, you made me go "whoa"
this is uber-awesome.
you ended this fict with a simple,
yet great way. srsly,
"She called herself the Great Ninja Yuffie, and somewhere someone cried with little-girl tears."

whaa. yuffie lost her true self!

Aww, poor Yuffums ~ !
This was really, really well written again.

Oh my gawsh...
This...

Your style of writing-
I think I'd like to inspire to write like you.

It's so beautiful and half-complete (if that makes sense)... it's wonderful.

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You are such a gret writer. Another brilliant story.

I liked this one! I only wished that it would have been longer. But I still liked it, it brought some emotions up.

Truly, that was gorgeous. Your writing style is beautiful ^_^ Loved it

RAWQ ON

Wow... this is really interesting... in a good way. I like the whole character personality transformation. Very nice. You got into the character's mind really well.

I wonder what you're gonna do with this? Are you going to keep going? Or is this a one shot? And if you do continue, is this a Squffie?

Ha! Rinoa is a loser... She couldn't take care of herself if her life depended on it! (pun intended)

Keep on writing!
DreamSummoner

wow.
see, this is the kind of stuff you dont see in the kh section anymore.
loved the way you portrayed yuffie, and how she changed as she grew older.
dont you dare delete this too! xD
~~lyphe

aw, I really liked this! I think u captured Yuffie's transition from a little innocent girl to the older, still somewhat innocent Yuffie. This was really great. Are you planning to continue?