So is Vinny in some sorta mentel instatutin or somethine...i bet Yuffies dead...yup realy good!

Wow!
That was great, and very captivating! Once I started reading, I just couldn't stop. I really want you to continue reading, so I can understand that last part, about how he killed Tifa, but she's still alive...
Anyway, please update as soon as you can!

/blink/ but Tiff's alive .. right? I wold like if u did a very very very very very very very very very very very very nice thing called ... /duun dun DUNN!/ EXPLAINING!! I'm So confuzzled right! >< i dislike being confuzed! .. That means JOO (you) MUST UPDATE QUICKLY! (Otma: that means that she likes it and do that stuff she wrote up there /point up/ see? ..)umm bye!

Wow. you have a really good story here. I love the darkness that it brings and you give good detail. I'm currently writing a dark fic myself using Rikku from FFX-2. I can't wait to read more.

Is it wrong of me to find that title of yours slightly amusing? It's a great title; I just think it's funny... in a sarcastic sort of way. That said, I can say without doubt of any kind that I love your title. I've never seen anything quite like it.

Er, anyway. This story is... well, brilliant. One thing that bugs me, however, is the constant "#!#!#!". You can write out the curses, if you want - it's PG-13. ;) But I like this whole dark/Hannibal-esque thing going on here. And Yuffie? I didn't think the rest of Avalanche cared that much about her, but it's always nice to see a different take on things (of course, that could only be me being apathetic towards certain characters again). I wonder what really happened to her? I guess I'll just have to read on, eh?

A great read so far (must read the rest when I have some time ;)).
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Well written and very interesting. I hope you update soon