 clara954 2009-11-17 . chapter 11This story is really cool! I know that it's been a few years, but I really want to see the next chapter! Please! Keep writing! |
 rapid review 2009-08-23 . chapter 11 pls update |
 tsuki-kage 2009-08-09 . chapter 11 so i have kept up with this story for forever but it also hasn't been updated in forever. Please don't abandon it! It's really addicting and good! Update soon! Please!
Tsuki |
 lemon-lime-whispers 2009-06-19 . chapter 11This story's amazing! |
 rosewolf44 2009-06-03 . chapter 11i like this story and i hope you keep it up |
 Cuz I Can 2009-05-26 . chapter 10Hi,
I LOVE this story! ...but I have to know, are you going to finish it? The suspense is killing me here, lol. |
 Odat 2009-05-15 . chapter 11Kenji is way too cute. Way too cute.
And next chapter? Please? Cause really. More sexings are needed. And Kenshin has to apologize to Sano for the carpet. Please? |
 Brukaoru 2009-04-25 . chapter 11Oh no, no, no! This story is not complete! It is a sin that such a good story has not been finished! I hope you will come back to finish this someday! Wonderful work, very well written! |
 kokoronagomu 2008-10-23 . chapter 2thank you for checking out my kenshin... sometimes i just 'got it' but most times i don't.
one imagines that when a chapter ends, time stands still in the world of the story. i figure since you left it with him tackled-- i have imagined a 'dog pile' as yahiko jumps on kenshin to help save sano then kenji thinking everyone was playing- jumping on top trying to tickle them all... then again again, whatever you come up with, you're the boss.
-- can't wait!
♥ |
 kokoronagomu 2008-10-23 . chapter 1for incentive--i figured i wanted to share a pretty picture of a 'real life' looking golden eyed kenshin: (remove spaces)
kokoronagomu. deviantart. com/art/hitokiri-battousai-100327546 |
 kokoronagomu 2008-10-22 . chapter 11sano's been eating carpet for a long long time, hasn't he?
lovely story. exciting, amusing. one wonders (hopes) if you're going to continue it.
*runs off to read other 'rk' fiction*
♣ thank you ♣
ginny |
 A guest i guess 2008-07-06 . chapter 11 wow... oh no i'm sad now! is this story discontinued? please finish writing it. Its too good not to have an ending! |
 Cuz I Can 2008-06-30 . chapter 11AND THEN...? Great Story! all it needs now is an ending! |
 fantasy4luvr 2008-06-19 . chapter 11:D
omg i LOVE your story
you MUST update soon pls
asap |
 unknown 2008-06-10 . chapter 11 Slow process indeed ( I didn't mean it rude, I know it doesn't sound like that but I promise you I didn't mean it rudely), because of that slow process I find the waiting almost impossible to handle, you are very cruel indeed. I love your story so much your grammar isn't bad and it seems like you have an actual plot, something that many fanfic writers forget to put into their lovely story. That and you made it so the characters are believable and not, you know completely out of character and the best at everything or they get beaten everyday type dealie. That and it's a drama and made not to be like a soap opera, which I find to be very admirable of you.
p.s: I know that I don't have the best writing in the world myself, however I figure I am still allowed to criticize others... I really don't have any criticism for you though... a shame for me really. After all I really do enjoy bothering others about imperfections. |