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| A guest i guess 2008-07-06 ch 11, anon. | abusewow... oh no i'm sad now! is this story discontinued? please finish writing it. Its too good not to have an ending! |
| Cuz I Can 2008-06-30 ch 11,  | abuseAND THEN...? Great Story! all it needs now is an ending! |
| fantasy4luvr 2008-06-19 ch 11, | abuse:D omg i LOVE your story you MUST update soon pls asap |
| unknown 2008-06-10 ch 11, anon. | abuseSlow process indeed ( I didn't mean it rude, I know it doesn't sound like that but I promise you I didn't mean it rudely), because of that slow process I find the waiting almost impossible to handle, you are very cruel indeed. I love your story so much your grammar isn't bad and it seems like you have an actual plot, something that many fanfic writers forget to put into their lovely story. That and you made it so the characters are believable and not, you know completely out of character and the best at everything or they get beaten everyday type dealie. That and it's a drama and made not to be like a soap opera, which I find to be very admirable of you. p.s: I know that I don't have the best writing in the world myself, however I figure I am still allowed to criticize others... I really don't have any criticism for you though... a shame for me really. After all I really do enjoy bothering others about imperfections. |
| Gir05 2008-06-01 ch 11, anon. | abuseplease update! This story is so good i read it once and remembered about it. I could find it i went on a search i love this its so good i hope to see more chapters. Keep up the good work |
| Obsequious101 2008-02-14 ch 11, | abusewow you've got a great story going here so please keep it up! |
| Lyphta 2008-02-11 ch 11, | abuseomg! i have read this story over and over again. i love it! its been 2 years since you last updated... i hope that this story is still alive somewhere in your heart and computer :D its just so unique and really really amazing! i hope that someday soon you update this! good job! keep it up! |
| midnightblue123 2008-01-28 ch 11, | abusewow...this is really an intense plot, loving it! |
| B 2007-10-17 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis is cool. It's driving me up a wall wondering what "the thug" said to Kaoru, and my mind has given me about a dozen possibilities. You write well, and I will be waiting patiently for the next time you get a chance to update. |
| A-aneta 2007-09-21 ch 11, | abuseI have been following your story for a long time! I'm quite anxious to see what happens next. I like the way you write, it's not difficult to picture what's happening in my head. I hope you can update the story soon! |
| jenna 2007-09-12 ch 11, anon. | abuseah! please update! please please please please please please! |
| shimmering-pain 2007-08-19 ch 11, | abuseloove this chapter! pleeaase update soon! :) Btw, will Megumi show up in the story? |
| katra 2007-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI totally love your characterization, and I LOVE this story! But um...are you ever going to update? It would be wonderful if you did! |
| CherryNekoChan 2007-05-21 ch 11, | abuseSo... when's the next update? This is good! |
| Miztical-Dragon 2007-05-19 ch 11, | abuseoh my jesus this story is so freaking cool! I really love it and I hope that you decide to update it soon cuz I'm so anxious to find out whats going to happen next! Kyah i love all of your stories! Keep up the awesome work and update asap. -Krystal- |