 ari-g 2009-02-26 . chapter 5you are killing me here... please, please continue
this is a great story! come on, you know you wanna write that next chapter! please =) |
 rurouni dee 2008-05-16 . chapter 5Good story. It follows the anime pretty closely; however, I think the A&K aspect brings a breath of fresh air to the anime. I hope you continue this story, eventually. |
 Obsequious101 2008-02-05 . chapter 5Yay! im just waiting for the next chapter now lol this is a great story! |
 canary 2007-06-19 . chapter 5 I've just seconded this fic "Furtive Glances" for the best Romance/WAFF story at the 2006 Rurouni Kenshin Reader's Choice Awards. Please take a second to accept the nomination as I think it deserves to win.
I've read a number of your work and enjoyed each and every one of them. They are inspiring and convincing. You've just made me join the Kaoru/Aoshi bandwagon. Please update soon! |
 sprout-angel 2007-03-07 . chapter 5Hi! I absolutely love this story. I've probably read it a million times. I would really love it if you continued. I've been waiting at the edge of sanity for the next chapter. Please say you will continue this story:) I will continue to wait until you say otherwise. Good luck! |
 mysterious mime 2006-12-14 . chapter 5This is so...BEAUTIFUL! I absolutely LOVE it. Great job incorporating actual anime plots into the story; it works out really well! You've got an awesome style too (good grammar, descriptions, and spelling; really nice characterizations and interaction). Anyway, I can't wait until your next update! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON! |
 reasons 2006-08-27 . chapter 5 plz plz udate! this story is awesome!! |
 Renleek 2006-08-05 . chapter 5WOW! You have absolutely no idea how much I adore this story! It's more than believable and well-written, so fluid that the reading goes by so fast (eventhough I often reread the bits I love). There were moments that gave me butterflies in my stomach, just thinking of being in Kaoru's place.
PLEASE update soon! Your fic has touched my heart! |
 Renleek 2006-08-05 . chapter 4AB-SO-LU-TE-LY BEAUTIFUL...
I adore the gorgeous simplicity in your writing that speaks volumes with such poignant words... I've never known how writers like yourself manage to do that. It remains a mystery to me.
Why doe it feel like Aoshi's REALLY Aoshi in this? Simply because you're a brilliant writer! You've kept them so much in character, I can't even begin to thank you for how much of a wondeful read this is!
I was actually listening to Samurai Champloo's "Shino's Theme" song while reading this chapter and let me just tell you, it was like walking through the whole scene as Aoshi mouthed a longing "Tadaima" to Kaoru accompanied by the music... g-o-r-g-e-o-u-s!
Onto the last chapter... *CRIES* (Please for the love of (my) life, tell me you've not abandonned this fic! PLEASE!!) |
 Renleek 2006-08-05 . chapter 3There are so many parts I lved ut truly this story is wonderful! *Hopes with all her might that Akane-Rei updates this awesome fic* |
 Renleek 2006-08-05 . chapter 2Absolutely amazing and beautiful! I adore adore adore (Xinfinity) how Kaoru and Aoshi are completely in character. They feel so very real, so tangible. I wouldn't doubt for a second that if Kaoru had found those graves, she would have definitely paid her respects and Aoshi being there and watching her from a distance is totally plausible.
"Again, he remained silent almost for the perverse pleasure of unnerving her."->That line sent chills down my spine because of how I felt his character come to life in seeing Kaoru discomfort. It's crazy how IC you portray them!
Also, I'm glad you threw in Aoshi's Oniwabanshu members' names, since he keeps repeating them (almost comically) constantly. You did it under the right circumstances minus the nag.
Although I'm only going on chapter three, I sincerely hope to God that you still update this fic... it's so hard to find a fic of an alternate pairing that stays IC.
Again, I adore this! Onto chapter three... |
 Renleek 2006-08-05 . chapter 1So far, ths is absolutely beautiful! It's subtle and it makes it very possible for the characters to feel this way!
Onto the next chapter! |
 forgottendiary 2006-07-22 . chapter 5Dod, I so freaking LOVE this! Thanks for the update (although I found it quite late). What's next?? Jinchuu??! I always get this little thoughts when Aoshi discovered about doll-Kaoru and all. XD |
 Serenity Blossom 2006-06-27 . chapter 5Ah, very good. This is well written and very easy to believe could happen. Keep up the great work. |
 Laia 2006-06-10 . chapter 5 Beautiful. Simply beautiful. This story makes me believe that the Aoshi/Kaoru pairing really *is* possible, even if it is in an AU story. I hope that you update soon—though, by your profile, it doesn´t seem like you update too regularly. I doesn´t really matter—Real Life tends to get in the way. Just knowing that you´re going to finish this amazing story makes this warm glowy happy feeling settle in my heart. To think that just an hour ago I was stressed about semester exams!
I want to encourage you to keep on writing. Your style is very polished and defined, or at least it seems to be firmly set. *smile* Have a nice day, then.
Laia |