Wow...poor Kagome was just sucked iinto thiis wasn't she ^_^'

Iif Sesshomaru gave me CPR, ii guarante u ii would pass out he moment iinrealiized he saved me

Oh geez Kagome...

This is an interesting story. To tell you the truth the ending isn't so much my favorite but it works out for me.

Je'dore la francias 'banter'. ma french is very rusty. but i picked up da jist of da convo. i loved dere banter the french was a very nice twist. i shall continue 2morrow. untill den.

thank you for the story. i dont know if i liked the 'way' it ended but i liked 'how' it ended. "they all lived happily ever after" lol

i'm very much injoy this story its very good

omfg i love this!

oh my...! this was so funny!!

no no no not to seirous i absolutly loved it! there were some spelling errors but i got what you said. i love how it was put together and all the fluff!! ;)

love ya sories sista
~kaori takata

i am amazed beyond words...aw man i peed my pants!

Okay...I tried. I really tried to read this. And what part I did read, I liked. But with all of the spelling errors (which I'm not too put-off by, since they were commonly missed words like site for sight, and deep seeded for deep seated) and the Japanese mistakes (if you're going to use Japanese in a story, please make sure the words are correct. Mononoke means ghost. If you were aiming for the Japanese word for cat, it's neko) I just couldn't keep reading. I think this could be a great stry if you would go through it and double-check your translations and the spelling errors. I'm not trying to be mean, so dont think I am. I'm trying to help you make this an even better story than it is.

Hi. i was wondering about your Japanese word for "father". I've only ever seen it as chichi. I've never seen "btou" and to be honest, it doesn't make much sense to me. I have a Japanese dictionary and it has chichi for father. I just wanted to know, because it could confuze people. ...Like it did me. lol.

lol this is a cute story :]
I love it!

I think you've got to be one of my new faves. You always write a good story!