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| Micha 2008-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abusewow!! You leave me speechless ! This is just wonderful, especially the end. Thank you so much for your Minerva. |
| Carol 2007-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is delightful. You have a remarkable turn of phrase and have beautifully captured an intricate and changing portrait of Snape over time. I love that you use McGonagall's perspective; it's an interesting way to look at a complex man. |
| DailyProphetEditor 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story - I read the German translation first, and then your English original. Very good! Actually I like the original even better, maybe that's just because English always feels better with Harry Potter stories... but anyway the style in your original writing is way better, some of that was lost in the translation. And the plot is just plain great. |
| Paladar 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. You've left me rather lacking words to describe the experience of reading this, and a little teary-eyed. What more can one ask for? Thank you for this. |
| Akinaria 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat a fabulous piece. You revealed so much more with the minutae than many do when they tackle larger swathes of life. You managed to not only convey the emotions you ascribed to the characters but make the reader fell them - quite an achievement. There was one typing error, but looking back I cannot find it, which may be why it has remained. It was a negative determiner, something like having left the "t" off "not". Not important but with how well crafted this is, I thought that you might like to know. |
| Captain Evermind 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseAw... that is simply gorgeous. You really are a master. This is so finely crafted, and so painfully beautiful. The Minerva/Severus relationship has always interested me because there are so many different takes on it, but I think that you may have just found the best. Wonderful, poignant imagery, and beautiful descriptions. I love the idea of his hands betraying what he really feels, and that only she understands it. I loved it. Thanks so much. :-) -Kat. |
| HulaHula 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseOh good Lord? Where HAVE you been all my life? AH! I have no words! No words! Stunned. HulaHula |
| Sandi 2006-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo I've been working my way through your collection. this is your best. there is so much understanding. Mcgonagal is a way undedeveloped character. So much beauty and pain. |
| cecelle 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful - thanks for writing! |
| ShadowBallad 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was really nice...I absolutely adore SS/MM; it's almost my OTP. Even if they weren't romantically involved here, their friendship (or at least her compassion for him) was really touching. Very nice story! |
| hotcocoalatte 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great fic. ^-^ |
| ProblemGirl 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely brilliant!! I have no idea what else to say but that it was amazing!! Here's hoping to you doing some more justice to Snape and McGonagall's characters. |
| K. A. Maples 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI must admit, I'm a bit of a fan of yours. I love everything you've done so far, but I have to say that 'Lesser Languages' will likely always be one of my all time favorit stories by ANYONE writing Harry Potter fiction. Thank you so much for writing it. |
| GreenMeansGo 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI reviewed on Checkmated but wanted to say again how much I loved it. |
| The Darkest Kreacher 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseEXCELLENT writing. Spectacular use of modifiers. I liked this a lot... for unfavored people, it was very intriguing. |