|Reviews for Clash of Federations|
| Sora with an S 5/20/13 . chapter 30
We are all stuffed...
| Lerris 2/13/13 . chapter 4
This is not bad so far, but this behavior seems inconsistent with minbari honor. I would have expected them to talk a little once the vulcans came.
| bogus1 9/2/12 . chapter 13
In this story, you made Delenn hold the Smart Ball while Archer and Starfleet hold the Idiot Ball. As much as I despise the latter, that's actually canon with that travesty of a show Enterprise. The real problem is that Delenn in B5 canon is mentally weak and she's incapable of putting together an argument. There's lots of people SAYING Delenn is some great leader and bowing before her and revering her, but the truth is that the moment she's faced with any kind of challenge at all, she is contemptible.
The Inquisitor was right about Delenn: "What a sad thing you are. Unable to answer even such a simple question without falling back on references, and genialities and what other people call you. Have you nothing of your own? Nothing to stand on that is not provided, defined, delineated, stamped, sanctioned, numbered, and approved by others? How can you be expected to fight for someone else when you haven't the faintest idea who you are?"
And it's absolutely true. Delenn is NOTHING. Except she's not sad or pathetic at all, she is contemptible.
| Guest 7/15/12 . chapter 30
Long wait but worth it. A bad guy chapter this time around complete with Q/Kiu. I hope it doesn't take so long for the next chapter. As the Minbari war heats up the Romulan war cools done just a bit. It sounds like the Romulan empire might be a little bigger then it was in cannon and much more threatening. Hopefully we don't have to worry about Space hippies infiltrating Starfleet or at least get to see the EA maintain discipline in the ranks.
| JJ Rust 7/11/12 . chapter 4
Very good chapter. Good, exciting scenes with the battle between Enterprise and the Minbari cruisers. I thought you did an excellent job with the debate by the Grey Council on whether or not to go to war with the Vulcans as well. You really captured Delann's sense of isolation as a little island of sanity in a sea of insanity and war lust, where those around her don't want to think, just kill anyone or anything connected with the humans in any way, shape or form.
I do think the opening battle scene felt a little too distant, more telling than showing, and could have benefitted from having a POV character to let us feel the hits on the ship and the chaos of battle.
Still, very enjoyable chapter. Keep up the good work.
| UNSC ODST 6/12/12 . chapter 30
Nice to see that this story isn't abandoned! This is one of the best Star Trek/Babylon 5 crossovers, especially since it is Enterprise-era. The plot is elaborate and well crafted, with the writing well done and a smooth read. Please keep up the great work, can't wait to see how things change; the plot thickens.
| JJ Rust 6/10/12 . chapter 3
Good chapter. I like the way you presented the characters' views of the different races. G'Kar's thoughts really stood out, especially having his eyes opened to Sheridan's loyalty to Earth, and his thoughts on how the Narn act like abused children lashing out at others was very telling. Well done!
One typo I spotted: "more here in the home has to go well, John." It seems there are some words missing.
Keep up the good work.
| shadownight1389 5/31/12 . chapter 30
Glad to see this back. Saw your thread update on spacebattles. I have reread the story and was wondering when we would see the fruitation of starfleet & EarthForce tech colaboration. Also are you going to give h
Earthforce more credit, they are a large military (including large ground forces) with a great combined arms doctrine. While I can see starfleet neutrilizing the anti-alien bias in the earth alliance. Shouldn't the EA make starfleet have a more realistic outlook and realize the military option is necessary at times.
Hope to see more soon
| stark40763 5/27/12 . chapter 30
Well, if Q's helping the Romulans, who have acquired Minbari Tech, then I guess that the Earth's of two universes are in for some interesting times. In the Chinese sense of course...
| karthik9 5/27/12 . chapter 30
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
| nased0 5/27/12 . chapter 30
That was a hilarious and surprising twist, the Empress divine consort must be of course a God Emperor!
Such supposed title should satisfy even Q's conceit!
| Paul Cousins 5/26/12 . chapter 30
I am glad you are continuing this story. It is very good.
This chapter was well written and plotted out. It was a good set up for the up coming chapters I hope you complete.
I look forward to your next chapter.
| JJ Rust 5/10/12 . chapter 2
Good chapter. Nice job handling the first contact between the two universes. I also like the bind you put both sides in. How do you help one set of humans with their war when you've got your own war to fight? I enjoyed the meeting between Archer and Londo, who's character you nailed.
Some typos I caught: "our science ships has detected" should be "our science ships have detected"
"the debris come from" should be "the debris came from"
"the humans in that universe has been" should be "the humans in that universe have been"
"Trip slammed his fist" should be "Stiles slammed his fist"
Keep up the good work.
| JJ Rust 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Pretty good beginning. Interesting way you had of how the rift between universes was created. Anxious to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
| Andromedanaea 12/15/11 . chapter 29
Very much enjoying this fic. Sorry that it has been two years since you've updated. :-(
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It occurs to me that the humans in both universes should create some sort of mass media of which they can broadcast pictures of Minbari and Romulans nuking planets. Propaganda is a weapon of war and the best, is the truth.