How can she be one of the seven Endless if she's the 8th? You should just call her the pesonafaction of Defiance. The Endless are all pesonafactions after all.

I...don't even understand what her purpose is supposed to be. It would be virtually impossible to embody defiance without continually contradicting oneself.

Incidentally, there are SEVEN members of the Endless. Destruction, while having given up his realm, is still alive and well. Thus making your imaginary member the EIGHTH, not the seventh.

But, I think everyone else has pretty much covered it.

dear lord... a Mary Sue... of The Sandman...
I won't even go into detail of how this story itself is total **, well, maybe the fact that Destruction IS NOT dead, he is merely "away" from his realm, therefore, you make EIGHT Endless...

Destrucion left his realm, he isn't dead. Therefor, there are already seven endless. One more makes eight. Therefor, your summary is a piece of shite.

Making up a major character with a realm that stupid, also makes the story itself a pice of **.

Congratulations.

I'm a bit confused here.

Would Defiance, er, appreciate defiance? Or 'commission' it, so to speak?

Honestly, it's rather hard to figure out what's supposed to be happening, why it is happening, and whatnot.

Daniel: You are Defiance. It is your place to embody that aspect.

Defiance: I am NOT! I'm NOT going to embody Defiance!

Daniel: Very well. By all means, leave your realm and give up your title.

Defiance: I'm NOT going to levae my realm and you can't make me!

Daniel: I never intended to make you leave. By all means, stay. With my blessings it will be nice to have somebody younger than I present at the family meetings.

Defiance: Oh, you'd LIKE me to stay wouldn't you? Well forget it!

THAT's what Defiance is.

Please, madam, if you wish to impress the world with how TEH GAWTH1!eleventyone1!! you are, you can do it in the Harry Potter or Lord Of The Rings fandom. Here, you're just Corinthian fodder. You do know who the Corinthian is, don't you? I only ask since your knowledge of the comics seems... rather limited, to say the least.

Stop writing, now. No Mary-Sues shall disgrace this hallowed fandom, and really what else could an 8th Endless be?