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Nixie
2008-07-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw...that was so sad. At least Stan's happy now, but that doesn't change the fact that he's still alone and Kyle-less.
PrettyLilJewGirl
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseSoo effing sad. But so beautiful!
Have you noticed that Kyle always has the worst life ever in fanfics? Either he dies, or his family dies, or his lover dies. Seriously! :(
Amazing writing, as ususal. Very emotional. Poor Stanny.
Shelby
2007-01-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw, I'm teary-eyed. This was too cute, too sad =D
Indiana Beach Bum
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseHa, okay I clicked the little purple box :P

Aw! Death is ALWAYS depressing, now matter how sweet you make it. And this really was sweet. I could sense what was coming before I even saw it was coming, really. Maybe Kyle was warning me? Hm...well at any rate, this WAS beautifully written. Not asking you to plug your own work, dear, but thanks for telling me about this one. I've always felt like you're the queen of one-shots, writing them to perfection from start to finish. This one is no different.

The flowers is symbolic--I LOVE SYMBOLISM. And I like how the focus is COMPLETELY on Stan and Kyle, none of this our-families-don't-accept-us bullshit that often plagues every story, mine included. Heh. And, for the record, Stan's bouquet sounds lovely.

The death is vague, and I'm curious as to how many anniversaries Stan has been coming to his grave site. It seems like this is a reoccuring situation, so I'm thinking Stan himself is middle-aged, yes? Aw, he needs to get on with his life! Any selfless lover wants that for their love. Guess Stan just needed to see that for himself.
Lilchicky004
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuseAww, why did Kyle have to die? This was hauntingly beautiful and it had such a sentimental, heavenly ending.

Lovely.
BroflovskiFan
2006-04-19
ch 1,
abuseaw this is so sad and beautiful!
Lil-Diego
2006-03-05
ch 1,
abuseAW
A thousand aw's lol. Very good work, keep it up
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Coffeey
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseAww That Was Sop Sad But Very Well Written..I Love It!:)
Kennyfan2005
2006-01-06
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was very beutiful. I am trying to hold back the tears because i am at school and i do not like crying in public. I love this kind of stuff. depressing. i like to read a story that makes me stare blankly into space for a while. Thanks so much for writing it.
cool shiz
2005-04-19
ch 1,
abuseThe way you wrote this fic brought tears to my eyes. It was absolutely beautiful. The ending was what really struck my heart; Stan finally understood why Kyle never smiled. You have such a way with words. Beautiful, just beautiful.
trixis
2005-03-07
ch 1,
abusethat was exquisite. Beautifully written, haunting even. I can't believe english is not your first langues. I don't think I could write something as wonderfull as that. I must admit, I don't usually review (bad me, i know) but i felt so compelled to review this. I'd like to ask you, uhm, well.. if you needed a beta, I'd be glad to assit. My e-mail is twice2ce@ or bendingteaspoons@ Anyway that's just me gushing.
thank you :)
Shika.Tot
2005-03-02
ch 1,
abuseIt was cool I liked it.
The Dude
2005-02-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was sweet. Great job!
Celler door
2005-02-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm overwhelmed that was beautiful, although I saw Kyle being dead when he first mentioned anniversary I didn't see the ghost bit that was beautifully written and wonderfully ended kudos
Anuy Layne
2005-02-27
ch 1, anon.
abuse;_; Aww, that was so cute, but so sad! Very well written and origional idea! Still, sad, though. ^^;
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