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| Tellemicus Sundance 2006-11-12 ch 6,  | abuseOne word: FUNNY! I love this!! |
| Tellemicus Sundance 2006-10-16 ch 2, | abuseHm, the only real mistake/error/problem in this chapter (I think) has to do with your reference to his newly awakened Ma-zoku ancenstry. If I'm not mistaken, this story takes place during the time after Sensui's death but before Raizen called him. Right? If that's the case, then it seems odd to me that he would know that it was his Ma-zoku blood acting up. It would seem more likely to me that he would be just as surprised as the boy by his actions there. |
| Tellemicus Sundance 2006-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha! Very good idea! I really like it. Add to the fact that you actually got a good laugh out of me only increased my appreciation of this story. I can hardly wait to see what you've done with it. |
| Hilary 2006-05-19 ch 17, anon. | abusethis was so good! i loved it. i think i see a resemblence between the auther and the charicter kit. |
| Anime's-mistress 2005-10-29 ch 17, | abuseExcellent job and wonderful story.Each chapter was great.If you did make a second ending that would be nice, but the last chapter and then the epilogue were wonderful and work perfectly. |
| Tucsi 2005-10-07 ch 17, | abuseWow. |
| YusukesgurlKeiko 2005-10-05 ch 17, anon. | abuseAW! THAT WAS SO CUTE! YOU REALLY ARE SUCH A GREAT AUTHOR! I just loved the way you intertwined the title with the ending. It made it perfect and it left that little tingling feeling in you. It was thee perfect ending regardless of how short it was. I barely even noticed until I read what you put LOL. It was one of the greatest stories I have ever read! I hope to read some other great Yusuke and Keiko fluff stories from you! Until then! Super job and dont lose your talent! Jackie |
| YusukesgurlKeiko 2005-10-05 ch 15, anon. | abuseLOL! OH MY GOSH THAT WAS SUCH A GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! IT WAS SO FUNNY AND I LOVED THE WHOLE FLIRTYINESS WITH THE LICKING OF KETCHUP OFF HER LIPS! WOW IS KEIKO LUCKY OR WHAT?! LOL, and the end scene with the horror thingy that was just too perfect too. Yusuke being all mean its so great and funny I loved it! ^__^ Keep up the great work and if needed please update! |
| kenshinlover2002 2005-09-29 ch 17, | abuseIt was a cute ending. The whole story was really good. Can't wait for more of these. |
| QT102 2005-09-28 ch 17, | abuseGREAT STORY! so happy with how it turned out! great job! |
| BloodeyRose 2005-09-27 ch 17, | abusehey i really liked this story and the freacky thing is that the girl kitty has the same name and nick name like me and she reminds me of me and i hope all your other stories are just as good as this one well until then HOLLA |
| Lexi Teniro 2005-09-27 ch 17, | abuseo^-^o AW! KAWAII! *fangirls non-stop* That was GREAT! I LOVED it! Wonderful fic, 'twas most enjoyable! *thumbs up* And now...a Kurama plushie for you! And look, he talks! Kurama plushie: I love you, SilverYoko300. Real Kurama: o.O WHAT?! *peace sign* Wuff ya! |
| Darkwolves 2005-09-27 ch 17, | abuseI loved the ending! It was super cute. ^_^ This has been a truly great fanfic! |
| dark dragon 00 2005-09-27 ch 17, | abuseshort, could have been longer but nice ending to a good story. |
| Liisha2theMoon 2005-09-27 ch 17, | abuseAww, what an adorable ending!! ^o^But it's over!! ;.; oh well... IT STILL ROCKED! |