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| Cat 2005-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good. Haunting and harrowing. you have an amazing talent. I was hooked from the first sentence. And it boils in your head after as well. Amazing. You captured their feelings so well. You made me feel the characters emotion. I almost cried...until my brother interrupted half way through. But truly amazing. |
| Drakcir 2005-06-06 ch 2, | abuseHello Author, this is your Beta typing. Update this story NOW! If you don't I will hunt you down and put you in the little cell that you put our beloved Atlantean in. [can't you tell I still think its John] Now, UPDATE I say, UPDATE! |
| rudhweth 2005-06-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseWhat!? Not a continuation!? Cruel, evil person. Please? |
| moonlightfaery 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abusei really, really loved your story it was so sad :( i luved it please write another one like that cos i will deffinatly read it :) btw i thought it was weir who did u think it was when u wrote it? sophie X |
| LittleKnux2008 2005-03-22 ch 1, | abuseaw! Wonderful story! |
| Jordan 2005-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseMust be John. Please make a prequal and sequal. |
| Scorp' Blues 2005-03-02 ch 1, | abusegood story too ! i also think it's shep, because he's military and i can survive to torture; but Ford is also military, so it can also be him, and the relation between ford and Teyla could be... hum... interesting ? |
| nebbyJen 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuseAH! What the heck was that all about!? Just a little FYI, but you seriously need to add just a wee bit more to this! 'Make up who we think it is'... that's just cruel! LOL! Of course you know who we think it is! |
| Drakcir 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWhy you gotta make me cry?? I always thought you did it on purpose, now I know that its true. It was John, pointless conclusion I know, but I don't think properly when I cry. You made me cry. Very good and dark fic, but I like dark, so thats ok. For some reason I like stuff that makes me cry, I'm almost as crazy as you are. Follow up fic? Yes! So, request for a follow up fic number 1, request for a follow up fic number 2, request for a follow up fic number 3, and [just for good measure] request for a follow up fic number 3. How's that for a review?? No where near as good as your fic, but it'll do, especially seeing as there's no point in trying. |
| melissa 2005-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed it. The detail that he keeps on counting is just brilliant. If I had to guess the character I would say John S. because only he could be strong enough. The story had a sense of calm that was so surreal. I would really like to see a sequel. |
| PentagonMerlin 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI think we all know who it is, just based on the way it's written. It's bloody good, no pun intended. |
| Orka 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuse*grinning like a possesed maniac* You like my stuff! Yippee! That was almost enough boyancy to keep me from crying during your fic...I'm begining to wonder why we keep torturing the guys we love so much, though. Then again, if all the fics were happy, life would be alot more boring. Keep up the minimal crud work! TeeHee, just kidding. You're stuff is great! |
| fanficaddict 2005-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse*standing ovation* :D that was great! Angst supreme *grin* I, of course, took it as being Rodney, I can see where it could be John or even Aiden but gotta go with my fav ;-) I gotta admit I gasped when I found out how long he'd been there, that's a long time, recovery would be extremely difficult *grin* I would love to read a follow up! |
| lightdarkangel124 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was good! I love it! Write more! I think that it's John but who is it really? I want to know! |
| stonedtoad 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseFollow up required and yes I got a little teary eyed so there! Toad |