<3 Finally completed, hurrah!

I read the last few chapters all together, but I'm just going to review this last one.

To me, Kurikara is really what makes this whole fic. Sato is great, but it's the way you write Kurikara-- in his relationships, in attitudes, his influence-- that really made me enjoy this.

I love what you did with Muraki, even though I don't quite believe it, considering Hisoka "sleep walked" to him. VERY SUSPICIOUS, but maybe he was just feeling nostalgic, hm? (Nostalgic for DAT ASS, ahem.)

I love love /love/ the magical aspects of this whole fic. I adore what you did with Hisoka and Kurikara at the end, with the reversal-- I love how you tie that in to Enma, and especially left the question of ~what would happen were they found out~ unanswered.

Some of the chapter transitions were very confusing/choppy to me, but I think it sort of adds to the tone of the story, makes you feel more in tune with how the characters feel.

:) Overall: great job. I had a fantastic time reading it.

In one way, Hisoka's being punished, in another he's being rewarded for his deeds. I wonder what will happen next within the new division that he'll be in charge of now. I almost want to see you continue this, but it's your choice whether to do a sequel or not. Keep up the good work and I hope to see you around, Dark Inu Fan

Oh, I do hope there's more ahead, because I'm very interested in this story. I love it =]

Kirakura isn't going to let Hisoka cast him off that easily, especially with such potential the boy has. What does Hisoka look like now, with the marks of being possessed? Keep up the good work, dark

I'm speechless. I actually cried a little. Wow. That depiction of Muraki...wonderful. Another great chapter. I have nothing else to say...simply wonderful.
JA.
~EH~

Dark drama is definitely your forte.

I came across this story today, and it's great! Please go on! By the way, a few more Hisoka/Tsuzuki moments would be great^.^

Love the angsty boys. *snickers at the crabs and hello kitty* I don't know how Tasumi puts up with these people. XD

Update! Another interesting chapter. I really liked the scene between Sato and Tatsumi. Simply perfect. It's about time Tatsumi stood up to him. Anywhoo. I also really liked the scene when Hisoka first woke up...wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter!
JA!
~EH~

Finally I've caught up. I love the way you describe battle sequence and magic rituals. The only thing that I caught was this:"No one was seriously killed." I think you meant seriously hurt since getting killed kinda screws up your day don't ya think?

This is lovely writing and the oc is a real hoot. Great work.

Interesting. A very interesting take on the bond between a shikigami and their shinigami. And, even though I'm a Muraki-fangirl I still loved the part where Kurikara discusses killing him. Wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter!
JA.
~EH~

e, you got me hooked on the first paragraph! i hope you update soon!! this is TOO good.

Yay, another chapter~! Keep the coming~! :)

it's rather good and very interesting, loving the idea as whole.. I'm just hoping you'll update soon, not in a few years...