this story is really interesting and i like how u don't spend much time on catch pokemon like some people who spend 10 chapters just to catch one

Good lord. OF all the starters you gave him the ugliest motherfucker of the pokemon world. At least the little kid doesn't seem gay.Try mudkip for a change, same zone, and one of the best pokemon you can get

Looks like Brandon's going be blake's rival.

Right in the middle of Kurt's battle... T-T Ah well, rewrite sounds fun.

THis is awesome! Update soon!

Dang, what's up with all the Ruby/Sapphire/Emrald parodies? This is only my second review and each time I do one it has a part from one of the Hoenn saga. But very good!

Rae.

Sorry!I Forgot An Age.!He's16 And He Has A Lot Of Knoledge About Pokemon.

Good Chapter!I'll Be Sure To Read The Rest.So,I Have A Trainer Description!Trainer Name:Duran Hills,Eyes:Green,Height:4"6,Hair:Black,Likes:Food,Hates:Ground Type Pokemon,Fav.Type Of Pokemon:Lightning,Owns:Pikachu,Elekid And Manectric.If You Like It,Please Add Duran Into The Story.Thanks.Ill Review Later.Bye.

Great story thus far, Character...

Name:Chris

Age:13

Description:A boy around 5 foot 7,wears black jacket with black undershirt and blue jeans,black hair; a mysterious past and no parents.

Favorite type:Dark and Dragon(has a Dragonair and Umbreon)

Region:Johto

Yay! New chappie! I like cliffhanger endings, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, while we're on the subject of names, Pokemon Amethist? Hematite? Meh, after D & P, Nintendo are pretty screwed on the 'names' front.

Hmm... Which tenacious reader would that be...?

A little different than what I was expecting but cool. And it carries over into another chapter. Though the next one better not take as long to get up...

hey, so far this is pretty good. I like the name Drano. I wanted to submit my charachter. You can use him as a trainer or gym leader.

Name: Ben

Age: 13

Appearence: a red shirt under a black and white jacket. He has black pants and white shoes. His hair is green and his eyes are too.

Pokemon: Vaporeon,Jolteon,Flareon,Espeon,and Umbreon.

Region: (whatever you want)

This is pretty gooD!

oh i forgot my pokemon's natare

gengar

natare:timid

squirtle

natare:Jolly

treecko

natare:sassy

there i hope u like it and i hope u put my caracter in ur story

oh i forgot some other info Seth's pokemon's attacks r

Gengar

nightshade,curse,nightmare,dreameater

squirtle

watergun,bubble,dive,tackle

treecko

absorb,pound,bulletseed,falseswipe

oh and here is what Seth looks like

Hair:medium long black

pants:baggy black with 2 zippers

shirt:grey long with mini coat

shoes:white with black stripes