Great story, I hope you add more! I found a mistake you should fix.

'When it comes time t fight, we have to have a plan so we don’t kill each other.'

You meant 'to'.

This story is very interesting...BUT! I think...NO, I KNOW! That the person incharge of this story is dead! You know how I know that? Cause I have read this story like about 8 months back and theres still been no change!

Damn this author whoever he/she might be...dont they know that keeping fans waiting is rude and brings bad luck? Sheesh...whoever and wherever your are, the author of this story, I wish your REST IN PEACE!

Cool I luv Diablo

I has a idea.I want both Grisom and Opyl to marry at the end of the events and then there should be a baby and both should name the child Kukanire for a boy or Amarina for the girl.

Excellent beginning. The rocky start you portrayed would be exactly as expected from two such polar opposites. Opyl's difficulty with the armour is a great reflection of the real game, where the soceress's armour class tends to be a fraction of the barbarian's - especially later on. Nice touch! The personalities also suit the characters - they've both got egos, just different kinds. I hope all the chapters are as good as the first two.

Yo, sleeping idiot, WAKE UP!

You dead or what? Hurry up and finish the story you dumb ass!

Very nice. I can't wait for the rest of the story.

Cool story! Keep it up.

Not bad. Wouldn't mind seeing more

This is really good! PLEASE write more! I want to see what happens! WRITE MORE!

Great story. Totally fantestic. But plz hurry up with rest of the story.

HURRY UP!

lookin good, keep goin...

Very nice beginning to a promosing storyline. Add a necro in there somewhere if you write more. Necros rule!

Good job! Im looking forward to the sequel. Is there any chance for that it may be devoloped a relationship between Grisom and Opyl?

Ending? sequal?