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kirramagic 6/22/10 . chapter 11
YAY! I'm so glad I found this fanfic again! XD

I read it years ago when this was hosted on a certain website and had a sudden inkling to search for it today and I'm so glad it's here!

This is the best Yui x Suboshi fanfic I believe in existence and let me say this one thing I've always wanted to... THANK YOU SO MUCH!

For writing this story it quelled the inner need inside for a fullfilment for this coupling and it did the trick and in my eyes this is how the story really turned out in the end. So once again thank you so much and good luck with any other work you may be doing
JustDanny 11/15/09 . chapter 4
Oh! Your story's amazing! I love it, though it had made me cry a few times. It's been a while since I read something as good as this! And I love your Yui-sama, coz she's so lonely and sad. I hope the story ends up happily, or I'll cry again!
SakuraRi 11/13/05 . chapter 10
AW . . . . How sweet! That was an awsome fic!
SakuraRi 11/13/05 . chapter 9
aw . . . that's a nifty chapter. I like the ending w/ the dolphin.
SakuraRi 11/13/05 . chapter 8
That's so strange! Ashitare a painter. Every seishi is a surprize!
SakuraRi 11/9/05 . chapter 7
aw . . . another great chapter!
SakuraRi 11/8/05 . chapter 5
This chapter made me cry a bit. It's like the Nakago that would have been if his childhood had been better. I thought for a moment that he was going to die. That would be terrible.
SakuraRi 11/8/05 . chapter 4
Awsome chapters. Sort of sad, but I like the way you presented them.
SakuraRi 11/8/05 . chapter 1
Aw . . . how depressing, but it was a good set up for the story.
Kaguranne 10/28/05 . chapter 3
I just thought you should know that unless you are talking about a Philidephia that is NOT in Pensilvania Yui is NOT in New England. It just bugged me because I live in New England and stuff...
Scarlet Angel16 6/15/04 . chapter 11
Great story, but is this all? I hope not cause I wanna know what happens.
ryven64 3/16/02 . chapter 10
great fic! I've never come across an idea like this, and I loved how you handled the

characterization(dead on!) Your story is a great supplement to the FY series because

it shows the much-deserved respect the seiryuu seishi should be entitled to. Finally, a story

that shows justice! Yui and Suboshi forever!
Silver Thorn not signed in 1/24/02 . chapter 11
that was so good. I was surprised on how you "personified" the unknown senchi. I mean, Tomo, Miboshi, and Ashatare weren't really mentioned in the series that much but u really came up with great ideas for how to make them more human and less...morbid. (i luv tomo o) Also, i liked what you did to Soi. Not that i wanted her to get killed off, but in all the reincarnation fics, they get together. I believe that killing Soi helped Yui realise that they (her senchi) had changed and not to waste second chances on something so pitiful as a past argument. Didn't Miaka give Yui a second chance after what happened in the book of the universe of the four gods? The celtic legend of Oisin is a good choice for this ff. Did u realise how similar it sounds to FY. Miaka and Tamahome fall in love but she is from another world, but they are so determined to stay together even if it means forsaking their families and friends. That was a great way to tie in the FY plotline with Yui's trips.

Ja ne

Silver Thorn
Antigone2 8/21/01 . chapter 2
sugoi! I love this. Yui focused story, good characterization, correct grammar, lots of chapters... _ I'm hooked. Thanks for writing this!
kiriel 6/30/01 . chapter 11
I meant to review this yesterday when I read it, but I'll do so now. Wonderful story, I've never seen anyone treat the Seiryuu with such sympathy. I'll read Fate, and review also. _
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