sweet
so sweet that i smiled so wide 'till my cheeks were hurt

this is great

This is a little late in coming, but I think this is a very well done fic. I've probably read it 5 or 6 times, and it always makes me smile. Thanks for taking the time and effort of putting your thoughts and ideas down for the rest of us. :-)

*le sigh* Damn...it's little moments like this that affirm why I love GSR--despite the wrenching ride it's been on the show--thank you for sharing.

(and not only is Griss' a hip man he's an innominate bone man...perfect touch that)

ew so many disgustin images ahh i hate u it is goin 2 take me 4ever b4 i can stop gaggin u could hav just said they were having sex that would hav been grusome enough not so many weird pictures

I really loved this story, the intimate feeling it gave to me, you're a good writer. Please write more soon :)

I adore this!! The bit of possible backstory--very original and lovely, btw--and Grissom's intimate confessions, combined with the real, IC way you've written them make this an Awesome fic!Well-written, I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing!!

I liked this a lot. Very good characterisation, especially Grissom.

I really loved this short little fiction, and I can almost imagine it happening. Your description helped me visualise it so very much -I could actually see it all as if I was watching a movie. Ah, the power of imagination.

Love the mention of little things like obsessions with non-erogenous bodyparts and the reference of the first time Grissom saw her. Just makes it all the more real.

I'll be adding this to my favourites, of course ;)

See, this is why it's worth waiting for you to get off your butt and write -- you combined fluff, sensuality, tenderness, and bittersweet longing into one glorious and perfect moment. Awesome.

He's got a thing for her hips and she's got a thing for his forearms? Well everyone's go some kinda fixation. Good story.

WOW...welcome back...this was great!
Thanks for sharing!
-Tav

I absolutely adore this story :D This has to be on my 'to print' list!
Absolutely beautifully written.
Thanks so much for sharing,
mandy

Nothing like happy, RST'd Geeks. Very nicely done. I also happen to be a member of the forearm gang in the GG thread at ytdaw.

Smokin'!! This goes in my file of fanfic stories I'd pay money to see on the show. Great dialogue, totally believable characterization. Thanks!