 The Four Random Ones 4/15/04 . chapter 3Shadowlord: *nods* Still very good. I particularly liked the way this chapter ended. |
 The Four Random Ones 4/13/04 . chapter 1Shadowlord: I've been meaning to start reading this for ages...*nods* And I must say, I am seriously impressed so far. To the next chapter! |
 angel 4/10/04 . chapter 4 hi,especially impressing story.will you continue to write more?please do too many people just give up half way.i look forward to your next post |
 Kabocha 10/10/03 . chapter 4OMG! I sat down and started reading this half an hour ago, and I just finished it. I love this storyline. Its well written, and it makes sense so far. Good job, please write some more! |
 MirandaBelle2004 10/2/03 . chapter 1Wow, I like this so far, can't wait until I can read some more! |
 underaouf 2/13/02 . chapter 4I'm enjoying this very much! You're pure evil, with that cliffhanger.. blah... more, pleasepleaseplease! |
 BunnyS. sign in I knew I forgot something 2/6/02 . chapter 4 *pouts* there's no more? *sniffles* Demo, I love it! Why no more? I really like how you've Written Aoshi's past! _ And his training so far, *grins* seems like you know a lot about the subject. Anyway, I hope you post more, or if not and you've written anymore past this, and it's not too big of a problem, could you email them to me? Arigatoo, Lee-san! I'll keep looking for an update! Baibai! |
 Aquarei 1/25/02 . chapter 1hm...a better summary is needed... |
 Yet Another DB Fanfic Author 1/16/01 . chapter 4Please do continue, I'm an Aoshi fan and the story's great. |