Very nice work.

*sulks* Aww, but I LIKE them kissing for no reason in the middle of a fight... but yes, this was way better XD

hey, i jus realised...some of my FAVOURITE FAVOURITE Ranma fics are written by you...i have read them at differnet times and didn't really notice, till i checked your FF Profile...

pls pls...please...i know this fic is sort of complete, by itself...but could you, like, write a few chapters about what really happens while Ranma's still under the influence of the spell...pls, i m sure it'll make such a good reading...thx! so much!

Tofu's got a point, lol. Shampoo being married to Mousse as a punishment, is also funny. However, Nabiki being on the RECIEVING end of blackmail is like some werid bizzaro world.

that is so wrong, it needs to be more then on shot

Ooh, funny! Akane creeped out by Ranma is always good, lol...Nice descriptions!! Hope you fix the 'first person, third person' problem though.
I'm glad Akane got an explanation in the end, too.

oh my god. that was funny.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD that's one of the funniest things i've ever read! Loved it!

An odd, but amusing one shot...

Funny... at least a little.

Okay... I just have to say that this story is AWESOME. I was laughing so hard. And it was actually kind of romantic too, even if it wasn't supposed to be very serious. You had some great lines in this as well. I especially loved:

“But I long to feel the weight of your weapon on my skull!” he whined.

And of course, when Ranma was lamenting the fact that Akane might not love him--and loved the torture of not knowing--that was the best.

And I can completely understand why you wrote this. I get frustrated and annoyed at all those type of stories too. But at least now I have one thing to be thankful for: because of them, you wrote this! ^_^

I laughed so much reading this fic. Really superb. You're writing style is simple yet expressive. It's a joy to read. That was one of the most weirdest, enjoyable fic i ever read. good job!

Way I think about it is a Ranma enjoys being hit by Akane but doesn't even realize that Ranma is even in love with her.
Now that Ranma has expressed his feeling for Akane. What is Akane going to do?

This fic is insane, but I liked it.

Wow, that was weird. Though you have a point, there hasn't been much good on recently. This was certainly an interesting twist though. (though, I think you are wimping out a bit saying the potion should wear off ;))

Good work!
-Doc