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Kyandoru
2006-05-11 . chapter 1
Wow I adore this! Please by all means keep going and don't stop! I was going to review for the one-shot that preceded this but I think it is sufficant to say that they both rock and please continue!
ja ne
KatsyKat
2005-10-03 . chapter 1
Ok – I must say first of all – I am a BIG fan of your work! So I don’t want you to take this the wrong way, I only hope to help in some small way to give you a different perspective on things. I like alternate pairings, I really do – but more than anything I like to have them justified. With the more typical pairings (like 1x2 and 3x4) you have a base to work from, but when you jump to something like Duo and Millardio – I just felt like something was needed to show how they got together as in what attracted them to each other. What you’ve written here was nice, but I felt like it was mostly just fluff – heartfelt and a little sappy, but with no substance. No “raison d’être” (reason to be) and a fairly weak conflict compared to your other fics. I felt very similar in your other short story “A Place to Belong” (which I accidentally read first). Otherwise, nice job on this scene it was very descriptive and true – I felt – to Duo’s character, at least.
Mithros
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
AHHA! i wondered if you would be nice enough to tell us... are you gonna do an after duo challenges heero chapter? u dont have to but...
sarah
fiery-icicles
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
whe! XD awesome. I personally prefer 1x2 but I'm starting to get fond of 2x6x2! awesome job!
Nikkler
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Yay! Happy story! But Duo didn't get a chance to tell the others about Mill so that's what the next chapter should be about. ^.^ Make Heero and Wufei SUFFER! -.- MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Huggles
Nikkler
karina
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Now I have to find the related story and I do hope you continue this. Like 2x6.
otherworld
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Lol poor Duo all nervous, I loved how it ended so sweet...and yes what happend next is crappy >
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