Oh I can't wait for the next chapter, Yautja-nii-sama it sounds so exciting!

u know this story is good and i like it but it kind a blew me off when it kinda became more about Roxy than lex but maybe that was how u meant it to be.

it seems to be a highly interesting story. I would like to see more as it develops. I feel it has a lot of potential and that it could be taken anywhere. Keep up the good work! ;D

*gently shakes your shoulder in greeting*

It may be your first weaving but it is very well made. Thank you for it.

Good job

soo if i get this right...tis-nue is scar...right?,ya get me all confused!

great story update soon please

This is so good so far. I'll read more after school. I always wondered if the preditor really liked Lex or not. Well that answers my question. I'm really enjoying this so much. I'll be sure to finish this tonight.

Awesome

I like your story but there's just one issue. It's jumpy. Kinda like when your watching a movie and the camera like to move so much it makes you confused as to whats going on. It was hard for me to read.

I really can't wait until the next chapter! *rips hair out*

Awesome story, character develpment is great. I've put this on my story alert list and I'm very much looking forward to an update.

AW!..I’m SO glad I finally came to reading this awesome story, I ADORE it. The plot just gets thicker and thicker!…PLEASE UPDATE! ^^

~Storm

P.S. You have officially got yourself a new fan!
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I should try and get myself one of those ‘Kiss the cook and beware’ aprons…XD I loved that chapter…*chuckles evilly*

oh...you seem to have used precious stone names. What do you think of the stone Quartz as a name. Do you think it's female or male?
I'd love to know what you think of my story Prophecy! ^^
Chow

*squeels* This is looking interesting...XD
~Storm

Lovin the whole story!

You should continue, please!