Hey I'm a 14 year old girl too and I really, really like your story. It's very good.

Only want you to know that.

Whoa that was good.

aww so cute i love it ! good job

Really good re-write of that scene. One of the better I have read and i have read a lot casue after seeing the way things went, you so needed that to change. Ok, Im rambling. This was great. Little short. But its not that it wasnt good, its just that since it was so good I wish there was more... Well, off to read some more of your fics!

Aw, so sweet. I think that was probably the best remake of Keg!Max! I've ever read. It was much more realistic than what a lot of the stories are. You really did well.

that was SO sweet plz keep writing update soon plzplzplzplzplz

See? It was easy. It was possible. They could have written it to make it possible. Instead, they decided to make him into a jerk, she into the damsel in distress that needed rescuing from her ex boyfriend, and ruin GG for us. Sorry. I'm bitter today... But I like your fic, and any fic in which they end up together.

:)

M.

Hey,

Whether this was short or not, it didn't matter because of how well this was written and the depth that you still managed to put in such a short piece.

Bye, smile :-)

So sweet!

Just love it! I still cant stand the fact that Jess is gone.

That was short but it was really great!

Interesting. Short but interesting. I like tha last lines.

"I didn’t need any pro/con lists. All I need is him."