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pris4ever
2009-12-02 . chapter 1
that is so cute i can definitley see that happining that would be a great flashback scene for power rangers in space,for them both
Seirei Nightlord05
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
Hai...First thing first...KAWAI!
It so cute, I can't truly imagine Zhane and Andros as toodlers.Being mischivous...that is easy enough to imagine..Keep up the good work.Ja ne...
Starlit Purple
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
Cute! I absolutely loved it! Now I'm off to look for 'Crimson Dawn'. Is Blue Flame on ff (dot) net?
Diplomatic Immunity
2007-03-21 . chapter 1
Aw, that is so cute!!
Jessica01
2006-03-31 . chapter 1
That's adorable! It definitely has an "Aw" factor. Could you please R&R my stories?
Etcetera Kit
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
That was adorable-- I think you captured the essence of Andros and Zhane at that age perfectly. The only thing I was missing was Karone. (I believe that her and Andros are twins, so it seemed a little odd to me that she didn't make an appearance.) However, that's a relatively small nit for this piece.

I loved the last line-- Zhane sucking his thumb and Andros chewing on his blanket. It was so cute and in character for them. Overall, good work!

--EK
The Great Dizzle
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Cute.
Daylight
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Cute! (almost too cute for my taste) And amazingly beautiful writing. The descriptions are incredible. I haven't seen such good quality of writing in a long time.
doc-trigger
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Oh, that's so sweat. BABY! Um, anywho, that was soo cute. I loved it.

BYE!
jenny
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
oh, that was so cute! so well written! i loved it! it was just so cute, with the andros taking a bath and zhane sleeping outdoors and andros pulling up the blanket cuase he wasn't used to sleeping in sunny areas... it was just so cute! i loved it!
PRfangirl
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
This is the cutest!I can so picture Zhane's Mom having to wrestle him for a nap and then he acts all cute about it!One question though who sucked his thumb and who chewed on blanket?
Ashley Hammond Astro Yellow
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
Oh, that is so cute.

Love,
Me
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