That was great!But u do need to make ember jump in and when spyro sees her he'll faint that'd be funny.Keep up the good work!

I love this story! I support SpyroXEmber! May that couple live for always!

I'm a big spyro fan to and i think this is on to a winner!
I don't really know what can inprove it!

SPRYO AND EMBER FOREVER!11

Even though I don't really enjoy love triangles,I still don't know why I read this...Cause I like Spyro x Ember better.I mean,they're BOTH dragons...You should get them together,then...Anyway,despite the love parts,overall,this story's got a great plot.I love I was somehow touched when the time Spyro,Sparx and Lindar were talking about the spirits.. "What if they are lost in a world they no longer understand?What...what if they are just asking to be saved?" That..is,like...a great sentence..!!That was the line that touched me.Tears almost got out of my eyes...Congratulations again!

Brilliant! This story is brilliant ( unlike that Legend-Of-The-Stripers slop )! Rainyday, you are truly an inspiration! I agree with you that Elder Tomas should be called Elder Lindar. I hate how Eurocom made everybody OOC in A Hero's Tail. Elder Tomas should of been Elder Lindar, Elder Magnus should of been Elder Cyprin, Elder Titan should of been Elder Altair and Elder Astor should of been Elder Gunnar. I rate your story 9/10.
I'd better explain the missing point...
When you were talking about Gnasty Gnorc, you called him a stupid Gnorc. You sometimes forget who might be reading...
While AHT Gnasty was pathetic, the Gnasty of Spyro1 happens to be my favourite Spyro villian. Don't you ever call Gnasty Gnorc a stupid gnorc ever again! I hate people saying that because he looks that way. Speaking of Spyro villians, who's your favourite?

Guh? What happened to my review?

Anyhoo, what I said after that was...

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Makes you really think about those spirits. Nice idea.

O_o;

Hm?

>_>

this story is awesome i wanna know what happens next so hurry up and write the next chapter

Wei! Why don't I look into Spro's section a little more? At all, I really did (and do) love him. Good story! I'll put on alert, oh yeah.

Love your stroy so far! It's on my favorites! This chapter is better then the last chapter! If your gonna pather Spyro up with Ember then can you put Elora with Denki please? Thanks if ya do! I hope you update soon!

Fwoo. Another chappie! (haven't reviewed recentley because I'm a lazy ass... sorry.) Very interesting.

Kers's mother... is she, by any chance, blue? I'm just wondering...

Another great chapter! I hope that Bianca doesn't burn the whole lighthouse down; that would be awful!

Anyway I wonder why Kers' mom is so... so... evil. I mean she wants Kers to kill his mate and son! What kind of mom is that?

I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Yay, I like the story so far. (hands you a cookie) Please update soon!