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Hocapontas
2009-11-29 . chapter 24
This story is incredible! I'm REALLY ANXIOUS for the next chapter! I would call this a 3x ultimate favorite! I'm guessing something will have to happen before Legolas will begin to trust Estel. What's going to happen when it comes time for the fellowship? Will Harry go with them? I think he should. He could be a BIG help.
jason
2009-11-07 . chapter 3
This story is crap. By no means should any Harry Potter male character be referred to as "beautiful".
calileane
2009-10-17 . chapter 24
some time ago... I was not ready to read your story. Ans strangely I learned something your story is made of, even before coming back to try and read it:

I learned that I could change my mind with time and experiences. Some things in this fanfiction were just 'difficult' for me to read at the time. And the reasons I would at the time find not to read seem now really stupid ^^ even if they were not at the time.

Your story is made of feelings of incredible power. Your words just have more meaning than mere words.

So it came to be I came, again. And this time went until the last chapter published. And what I read, I loved.

Do you thing you will write more?
Alo Amicus
2009-10-02 . chapter 3
By the way, the line at the beginning goes "denial is not a RIVER in EGYPT".
harrylover101
2009-06-23 . chapter 24
O.O i love it please update!
ryuou
2009-05-15 . chapter 24
Love the story and the Characters. I'll be waiting for the next update!
Sandic
2009-03-28 . chapter 24
Brilliant story, love the POV and Characterisation of your characters. Cant wait for an update, keep it up.
Lupiya Salmar
2009-02-21 . chapter 24
I'd love to see what happens next, so I hope you continue this fanfic! It's nice how you've made Aragorn really important as well and that Harry isn't some obsessed over, center of the universe xD Great work!
Red Jeanie
2009-02-20 . chapter 20
You watched The Lion King when you wrote this chapter, didn't you! Liked the little tab bits you put in.
Draeconin
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
-a pair of matching black pants.

'Pants', in the UK, refers to underpants. To not confuse any readers from that area of the world, you might want to use 'trousers', 'slacks', or similar.

Harry's form is a lion? How cliche. Couldn't be any other sort of big cat, could it? Had to echo Gryffindor. *sigh*

BTW, 'Dear' isn't used as a letter greeting by itself unless it's between lovers (nor even with a name, unless they're close friends or closer). Same with using 'love' as an ending, although that could also include family members. There are many other greetings and endings that can be used that could be far more appropriate, depending on the relationship between writer and recipient. You might want to look up some of them.
IReadOnly
2009-01-02 . chapter 24
This is one of the three best Xover with LoTR I've ever read...
Merrymow
2008-12-22 . chapter 24
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Serena R. Snape
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Look, before you start writing a story, why don't you check if your grammar is up to standards and if you don't know how to spell a word, then why don't you use a word that you know how to spell. If you don't know how to spell delinquent, then I don't know why you used the word at all. I mean, I'm sure the story would be nice if not for all those grammatical errors that you've made and not to mention punctuality errors as well.
SpringCherryBlossom
2008-12-14 . chapter 6
Sorry but this story just makes me want to GAG! AWAY AWAY AWAY TO FLUFFY FOR MY TASTE! I personally don't like the pairing but oh well if you do it your story.

bye! :)
of Serendip
2008-11-21 . chapter 6
so not only did she go behind his back telling the twins his past secrets, she also likes to play a game with his emotions? how nice of her.
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