I enjoyed this story very much. It's a nice length, and the dialogue is spot on. :)

I always cringe when I hear Jeff put Al down. I always wanted them to at least find some respect each other, especially after Anne came down with Polio.

I think the writers missed the boat in that last episode. When Al took Jeff to the train station.. they should have shown a scene where they tried to work things out.

Thanks for giving them some hope! :) :)