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| Aria 2005-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this story. As much as I'd like to see Grissom and Sara together, it's always been frustrating to me to see how he jerks her around. Good for Sara for moving on even if it is sad that two people who are so perfect for each other missed their chance. A good, if definitely bittersweet read. I suppose you could always add another chapter, but Grissom had better do alot of groveling... ;-) |
| nithe 2005-09-30 ch 1,  | abuseOkay, after reading 'The Chi of the Last Great Oreo', I had a sudden craving for Oreo's. I ate them while reading 'Subtle Exisrence', and now I need some more for comfort after reading this. Powerfully written. I enjoyed it very much. |
| ebonyfox 2005-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, he is a fool. But we love him so. |
| QueenKate 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abusehaha that was awesome! leave him being a fool for once... ah you have done justice! ha! |
| Anamin 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, he gets what he deserves. I'm glad for once. Very glad. After what he said to Sophia and Catherine's tush? Gah. I'm in an I-hate-Grissom mode right now. |
| brainfear 2005-03-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat angsty fic. I liked it. I hope you plan on continuing. |
| TrishG 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWill you keep writing? This is so sad. |
| untapdtreasure81 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseyou could always make this a happy ending and make it like a dream or something and get him to get his head out of that microscope and get the girl! |
| April 2005-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseu know i bet this is what would happen if Grissom tells Sara too late. U have just made my fear of Grissom and Sara never getting together even more real. Why did you write such a sad story? |
| Woodstock99 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseIt was vey sad, but also very good! I guess 6+ years are to late... even for Sara... |
| rokothepas 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseVery sad but so well written. I hate bad endings but I liked your story. Keep ip up;-) |
| Transylvanian 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseSo sad, why did you write that, so sad. |
| hazelmom 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseDesparately sad, but so, so good. I am glad you posted. sheila |
| CSI-phreak 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseHey, that hurt! And it's only a fic! I think I may have very bad dreams about this tonight. :( Very good peice of writing though, don't beat yourself up about it. We read fluff most days. A bit of heartbrak balances it out! Keep it up! |
| whirligig 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good even though I'm going "argh!". I'm going to quote a review you gave me once: Fix it. Fix it NOW. (taps foot.) FIX IT NOW! Please? : ) |