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FantasySci5
2005-05-19
ch 4,
abuseWOW! That was great! Harp finnaly figured out an invention, and it worked! Only, he had his oh-so-not-happy-with-the-quiet-peace crew mates in tears!

Don't get me wrong, Harp made PLENTY of stuff that worked, but...never mind! Great!

Beka cried...aw!
Narc0tiq
2005-04-03
ch 4,
abuseBeautiful story RV! Loved it to death! :D
Narc0tiq
2005-03-17
ch 3,
abuseOMG! It's Harper! OMG! Keep going, please, this is great!
PeaceKeeper Dax
2005-03-09
ch 3, anon.
abusejust curious if you are gonna show any of rommie's emotions with missing and finding harper.
Flash Foreward
2005-03-08
ch 3,
abuseThis is a great chapter. I noticed that when you want to write 'quiet' you often write 'quite' instead. I wouldn't have pointed it out, but it happens in more than one chapter. Nice job on this chapter, though!
prin69
2005-03-08
ch 3, anon.
abusehaha, getting into the mindset of harper by drinking sparky and hitting things. wonderful! ;)
Narc0tiq
2005-03-08
ch 2, anon.
abuseSo, where DID Harper vanish to? What was he working on? I'm curious...

Oh, by the way, the story is written very well, keep up the good work!
prin69
2005-03-02
ch 2, anon.
abuse"One such idea involved tying her up; which suddenly, and unexpectedly took on a completely new direction in his brain. Oh god, where did that come from? He thought." hahahahahahahahahaha. oh that's too awesome! this is a really cool chapter. aw, poor beka. ooh, mysterious missing ten seconds. hope that they find him soon!
prin69
2005-02-28
ch 1, anon.
abusehahaha. i love this. very evil of beka to leave it to rhade.
Flash Foreward
2005-02-27
ch 1,
abusePoor Rhade has to explain everything to Dylan. I hope this isn't the end, I'd like to see Dylan's reaction. In fact, I'm imagining one of my own creation right now, And it's funny.

Great job on this, I like it. It's quite amusing.
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