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| FantasySci5 2005-05-19 ch 4, | abuseWOW! That was great! Harp finnaly figured out an invention, and it worked! Only, he had his oh-so-not-happy-with-the-quiet-peace crew mates in tears! Don't get me wrong, Harp made PLENTY of stuff that worked, but...never mind! Great! Beka cried...aw! |
| Narc0tiq 2005-04-03 ch 4, | abuseBeautiful story RV! Loved it to death! :D |
| Narc0tiq 2005-03-17 ch 3, | abuseOMG! It's Harper! OMG! Keep going, please, this is great! |
| PeaceKeeper Dax 2005-03-09 ch 3, anon. | abusejust curious if you are gonna show any of rommie's emotions with missing and finding harper. |
| Flash Foreward 2005-03-08 ch 3, | abuseThis is a great chapter. I noticed that when you want to write 'quiet' you often write 'quite' instead. I wouldn't have pointed it out, but it happens in more than one chapter. Nice job on this chapter, though! |
| prin69 2005-03-08 ch 3, anon. | abusehaha, getting into the mindset of harper by drinking sparky and hitting things. wonderful! ;) |
| Narc0tiq 2005-03-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseSo, where DID Harper vanish to? What was he working on? I'm curious... Oh, by the way, the story is written very well, keep up the good work! |
| prin69 2005-03-02 ch 2, anon. | abuse"One such idea involved tying her up; which suddenly, and unexpectedly took on a completely new direction in his brain. Oh god, where did that come from? He thought." hahahahahahahahahaha. oh that's too awesome! this is a really cool chapter. aw, poor beka. ooh, mysterious missing ten seconds. hope that they find him soon! |
| prin69 2005-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abusehahaha. i love this. very evil of beka to leave it to rhade. |
| Flash Foreward 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abusePoor Rhade has to explain everything to Dylan. I hope this isn't the end, I'd like to see Dylan's reaction. In fact, I'm imagining one of my own creation right now, And it's funny. Great job on this, I like it. It's quite amusing. |