 Silent Phantom gal 5/9/12 . chapter 3Love the idea! |
 Fen Dweller 2/8/12 . chapter 18 I hate in when an author makes Harry (or any character, really) stupid, unreasonable and prejudiced, just to artificially create some kind of drama.
Harry is the LAST person who would try to argue that people ALWAYS turn out just like the people who raised them. After all, Harry was 'raised' by the Dursleys, and he doesn't act like them.
This whole confrontation with Raven about how ALL Slytherin students are evil and ALL children end up just like the people who raised them is a ridiculous bit of artifice used to prop up an equally ridiculous situation of tension between Raven and Harry, and I would think most readers (with two brain cells to rub together), recognize it for the pathetic authorial crutch that it is.
They know, instantly, when they read it that Harry does not act like that, that the author is forcing him to act out of character in order to shoehorn an element into the story that she couldn't figure out how to fit in any other way, and it takes the reader right out of the story.
(Not that I'd expect a Dramione fan to recognize what constitutes in-character behavior.) |
 Seductria 7/14/11 . chapter 6"Hey, Robin, it's Slade." Haha! Loved it! |
 Em0-gIrL-cRyInG 7/13/11 . chapter 2I love this story. is it kinda ray and bb? |
 Heey 4/11/11 . chapter 5 through, not threw...
Cool Story! |
 ReadingRaven019 7/18/10 . chapter 23I rather liked it. There were quite a few errors like missing letters or words or how you would always spell through like threw and stuff, but good story. You should write a second one to follow this one up. I would love to read it. |
 xXxShiniXKazexXx 4/8/10 . chapter 1Brilliant story! It would be interesting if you continued. ) |
 buddybuddy96 7/20/09 . chapter 6I am hooked. THis is very good. One thing though. You keep using the word 'threw' in places where it should actually be 'through'. It isn't a major problem. |
 Taeniaea 9/7/08 . chapter 23great story |
 Taneya 6/17/08 . chapter 23This is a very good story, and I'm kind of sad that it's over. As I read each chapter, I tried to predict how things would happen or think of how I would write them, but you surprised me every time! I like how this was Raven-centric, as she's my favorite character. Great job on this. This is just a suggestion, but a sequel might not be a bad idea! :) Awesome story, it was fun to read. |
 hailtheheartbreakers 6/13/08 . chapter 2Beast Boy is vegan, not vegetarian. |
 Star-Child-Yeci 3/24/08 . chapter 23I loved this tory, it made me really happy...I just loved it, and I cant think of anything to say. I have followed this story, and sadly I have not reviewed earlier.
You have inspired me and I would like to say thanks. |
 Night Owls 8/31/07 . chapter 23This was a great ending to a great story. Sorry I'm reviewing now and not earlier, but I thought it was too late to review. But now I've just decided to review anyway. This story has been one of my favorites and still is, even though it's over.
I loved every chapter, especially chapter 8. There was a lot of action in that one. Raven's encounters with Voldemort were also very interesting to read. In some ways, Voldemort and Raven are similar.
I'm very relieved that Raven was able to keep her memories from being Obliviated. That would have been really bad if they had. I don't know whether or not I'm disappointed that she didn't tell the other Titans, but I think it was a good decision.
I love this story! And if you decide to write a sequel I'll be eagerly waiting. There are many possibilities. Awesome story!
Rock Royalty |
 classygyrl 11/7/06 . chapter 1excellent |
 JediClaire 7/24/06 . chapter 1Wow! BB is my favorite character and you have got him down brillantly! |