That's completely brilliant! I love it! ;) Thank you for sharing it with me! ;)

aw! that was sweet! was it Nick or Kate that died? aw! that's sad and awesome. i love it.

Wow... *sniffs and wipes a tear* this is TOTALY Nick... I mean, come on, how many hints need to be in there that is hotheaded Nick ) I LOVED this story... moved me to tears it did, even for being so short... lovely lovely work!

I like it, but it needs to be a little longer

Oh...

snifs

Sad! ;_;

It's so short but nevertheless unbelievably sad!

I think it's Nick crying... poor Nick...

... But it could also be Kate...

I don't care, it's sad both ways!

OMG! That has to be Nick saying goodbye to Kate!

Very emotional!

Gem xx

Oh, come on... that was SO sad I almost cried (and I'm in school, as you may have guessed, what with my not having an internet connection at home...)

Seems to me your style gets better with each story you post (honestly, I mean it!). Keep it up!

Oh geez, I won't read that again now or I'll really start to cry. You captured everything so amazingly well. Very, very good story!

Conny