LOL! "Flipping off" Kavanaugh with the glowing-glove! snicker... And I loved how Elizabeth handeled their reprimands (in the next story?) by filing the paperwork in the "circular file drawer"! Hee, hee! ~jane

Love it! Wish you would write more like this!

Great fic. Loved the idea of doing it from Kavanaugh POV. Really well written!

An unusually sympathetic Kavanaugh. Nicely done. Also some of the early lines were terrific. Especially, "It is like some strange feng shui nightmare when the two of them enter a room together, you can almost feel the planets realigning into an apocalyptic blueprint for destruction." and the line about adjunct waiting time vs full time prof waiting time. Heheheh.

Wow, that was BRILLIANT! You pegged the man just exactly right--and the contrasts you drew between him and McKay were a perfect addition to the POV series. LOVED it! *snags for faves*

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Great story from an interesting point of view. I loved your first paragraph and descriptive phrases...Olsen twins of doom...LOL! The inane dialog between McKay and Shepherd is great, and Kavanaugh's comments are priceless. Keep up the good work and post another story soon!

A fantastic fic, and kind of sad (but predictable) that Kavanagh only half-accepts the point at the end. I especially love Rodney's "That's probably the best compliment I’ve received in a long time" :)

Wonderful piece. Very well put together.

It's strange...I'm finding myself increasingly fascinated with Kavanaugh. Strange because I hate his guts yet love reading about him. So thank you for throwing a fresh douse of fuel on my growing interest in his character.

Excellent, like all of your other fics. Kavanagh's PoV was awesomely done, i especially like the part when he got punched in the nose and he had to listen to Sheppard go on about how dark it is. And i even felt bad for him cause he had no friends, but then i remebered he is an a$$hole and all was right in the world again.

Great Kavanagh voice, he's *so* melodramatic right from the first paragraph. And his less than flattering descriptions of everyone were amusing in a sort of pitying way. The somewhat inane conversations between John, Rodney, Ford and Carson were great. They really got the sarcastic but friendly tone and it's easy to see that the team use the humour to distract themselves from the situation...something which seems to have escaped Kavanagh's notice. I bounced with glee when Rodney punched him, and I also enjoyed the tension when he was foolishly baiting Sheppard.

His last few paragraphs made me almost begin to feel a tiny smidgen sorry for him...*almost* mind. His thoughts on how he prefered science to friends, honest...I didn't believe him, but it's his own doing.

Oh and, I loved the one fingered glowy glove *he*.

Your stories just keep getting better and better. This is superb. Your characterisation is excellent, and that's quite a skill considering you keep shifting POV to a different character in each one. Most of all the phrasing and humour are perfect. I love it!!

Excellent! I loved this! I can't stand Kavanaugh and it was very fun to see things from his POV. I think you did him perfectly :)

Brilliant as always...I loved the outside peek at the relationship of the team. And I very much enjoyed McKay keeping the bad news to himself while they tried to effect the rescue. Very nice indeed.

Very nice! Keep it up!

I have really enjoyed all of your POV stories. I have read them several times. You have captured the essence of friendship between two colleaques and the antics that arise from it. Please continue with this series. I look forward to your next one.