I love it!

Hm. In the next chapter you should definately have flashbacks.

wow that was a really great story
are you continuing it
will kel keep in shape secretly
and will she have to go back

Great story! The only realistic goes-to-the-convent story I've read in a while. Great job!! Update soon!

keep on writin(typin)

so who is this story centered on the group of girls or Kel?

This is interesting, I would love to read more to see where you go with it. It's different, I've never read one like this before and you are a really good writer. You paint a picture very well. Please update soon.

This is really good. Please update soon.

i like your story and the ideas that go along with it, your description of the girls is strange and could be worked on. It just doesnt seem as if it belongs.