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| Dreamer22 2008-05-09 ch 7, | abusevery well done, I greatly enjoyed that, though what does 2364937 mean?? |
| smithcrafter 2007-07-07 ch 6, | abuseI'm enjoying this entire story, but this chapter is something special. I loved Gen. Hammond's comments to Jacob while Jack and Sam were dancing, and Selmak's comment in return, about George's intelligence. Consider this a review for the entire story through this chapter. |
| Nikki 2006-01-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseWhat do mean 'not sure about this one'? This was brilliant - loved it - thought it was really funny - esp teal'c, LOL! And the whole 'interrupted' thing, LOL! Again, another wonderful addition to the series - can't wait to read the next! :) |
| Emerald Green Queen 2006-01-17 ch 7, | abuseI loved the beginning of the story. It was so sweet, how you showed the friendship that exists between Sam and Daniel... especially given how the next year things won't be the same. I thought the necklace sounds beautiful... even if Sam's birthstone, is, technically, an emerald and not topaz. I loved hearing about Magnet's progress! She sounds so gorgeous! And I'm very amused that she listens to Sam better than Jack. And their little 'custody' arrangement... but it does make sense, given the fact that they're off-world so much. Nice time together, despite being rushed. Um, about the DVDs... I really doubt that those trilogies were available in their entirety at the time, which at a rough guess would be early 2002. I don't remember the release dates for LotR exactly, but I know for a fact that the two Matrix sequels didn't hit the cinemas until that year, the final being late 2002. Still, cool movie choices! and Cool presents all round.:) I thought the albums were fabulous! I laughed about Jack freaking out about Sam's dress... hmm... Cassie is still sneaky! But maybe not as evil this time around!:) Interesting story idea, having a great big party with everyone invited. Though not as personal, I think it's a good idea, at least once.:) And the more distractions, the less trouble from Jacob!;) Don't give anything to Maggie to eat? Yeah right, I'm sure everyone's gonna listen to that! LOL, I thought it was amusing how Sam gave Cassie her way, and let her go meet Dominic at her place. Ok, she's not her mother, but she's far easier on Cass than her own father is on her!;) And jack reaction to Cassie's little arrangement... he does the role of an angry father very well! LOL! I loved this conversation: She met up with Daniel in the kitchen. "I heard one of Janet's nurses and one of the gate technicians placing a new bet on you and Jack because of the way he kissed your cheek earlier," he informed her loudly. "Sh, you're so loud when you're drunk," Sam scolded mildly, pouring a cup of soda for him. "Did you hear any of the bets about you and the Colonel?" she added innocently. His jaw dropped open and she couldn't help but laughing. "Just kidding, Daniel." Karaoke is always good for a laugh! Not only is the idea of Walter and Siler singing a duet together... last years "Ain't No Mountain High Enough' performance has well and truly bitten SG-1 in the bum! LOL! Nice one, Hammond and Jacob! No-one else could've done it, eg: 'Daniel, Sam, Teal'c, Jack, and Janet were all refusing to go up there, however, and nobody was giving them too much grief about it, as Daniel and Sam were the guests of honour and Jack was host of the party. Janet was exempted because she had all those handy needles at her disposal, and Teal'c, well, nobody really told Teal'c to do anything he didn't want to do.' Anyway, I had to laugh at Teal'c being 'that traitor', and the comments about the gang, made byt the Two Evil Generals: "Oh I don't know, I think they had a bit more room to move around on the tape, and were much less..." "Sober?" Hammond supplied. "I was going to say 'inhibited', but 'sober' works too. So I kind of liked that one better..." Ooh, I loved the zipped-up coat scene between Sam and Jack!:) Even if the time (dammit!) wasn't right for them to be able to kiss in peace. And then when they danced properly, I had to laugh at Jacob's discomfort! But I did like the chat Jacob had with Hammond; that was nice. Hmm...: "Enjoy the remainder of your evening, O'Neill," Teal'c said as he headed up the stairs. Jack spent about half a second wondering if Teal'c had meant that to sound suggestive or not before nodding off to sleep. Followed by: Teal'c stopped, gave them both a small smile, and took pleasure in slowly looking them both over, enjoying how nervous and uncomfortable it clearly made both of them. Still with a small smile on his face, he said calmly, "Major Carter, it merely looks as if you and O'Neill are continuing your annual birthday tradition. I must take this water to Daniel Jackson now, or he will come looking for it himself. Good night." Observant guy! Well, if Cassie filled him in, I suppose that'd explain... but somehow, I think he'd be able to work it out himself.:) Loved the finale... yes indeed, their kiss was interrupted! Great job!:) |
| CrystalClearElphaba444 2005-07-28 ch 7, | abuse8O 8O 8O 8O Wow I love it so much WOW! |
| deathstreet89 2005-07-17 ch 7, | abuseThis was definatly one of the better stories of the series |
| melpomene-muse of tragedy 2005-06-29 ch 7, | abuseAnother great, sweet, shippy story! Too bad we only get one a year! |
| melpomene-muse of tragedy 2005-06-29 ch 4, | abuseOHMIGOSH! this is so adorable! |
| phoenixfeather6988 2005-06-13 ch 7, | abusethis is a great series though i am going to have to finish it tomorrow seeing as it is 2:30 in the morning here and i am about to get into big trouble if i don't go to bed now. |
| Destiny Skywalker 2005-05-31 ch 6, | abuse//“I don’t know what you see when you look at that man, Jake,” George started gently. “But I see a man holding everything he wants and knows damn well he can’t have. As hard as I’ve tried, I can’t feel anything other than pity for either of them.” // Ok I hate to be a total goosh but that is the absolute sweetest thing I have ever read. I kid you not. |
| Soccer-Bitch 2005-05-01 ch 7, | abusegreat story. i really enjoyed it. ^_^ |
| SW 2005-04-22 ch 7, anon. | abuseWhen will you be posting BT6? soon i hope, it's so great!! |
| PKgirl 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseOMV - am supposed to be revising for important exams, and, as always, have been distracted by fanfic: not good!! But this fic - the entire 'Birthday Traditions' series, in fact - is brilliant. I've been sitting in my room laughing out loud. I think your characterisation is great: Teal'c is perfect, especially with 'Magnet O'Neill; Daniel's almost always drunk, and therefore totally cute, but I think you've got the clueless side of him down pat; and as for Sam and Jack...well, what do I say? They're both different to how they are on the show, but in a good way. They're more open about their feelings without ever actually getting anything really out in the open, but still both focused on their careers. They totally work for this fic - I think it would just be wrong if they were exactly how they are on the show, 'cause then nothing would ever happen between them!! Eagerly awaiting...actually, not so eagerly awaiting 'Birthday Traditions 6', as it'll be featuring Jonas instead of Daniel, and that's just wrong!! Anyhoo, can't wait for it!! Aeryn |
| Quinndolynn 2005-04-09 ch 7, | abuseNah...they would have followed the rules. they always do... Don't know if I've mentioned it before, but one of my favorite things about your stories is drunk Daniel. Don't know how you can top this year, but I can't wait to read teh next one. |
| BookWorm37 2005-04-07 ch 7, | abuseI think that sooner or later Sam and Jack are going to break the rules and go all the way, but I liked this one a lot. I find it very funny that Sam brought up their 'situation' because knowing Teal'c, he is too polite to say anything. |