Except for a few grammar mistakes and Japanese intrusions (pardon me but I'm very strictic in language uses) the story is well developed and has a good character insight.

It was a very good way to put Basara and Gamlim together, to 'solve' the problem. Something we could never see happen in real world...

But I guess it was a bit harsh. Dinamite 7 would help for Basara to find out what he is searching for.

What's wrong with Gamlin and Mylene being together? Basara is an asshole who cares only about his music, everything else comes second. Now, if you think that singing while people die all around you is heroic, be my guest. For my part, it just makes him all the more selfish.

Very beautiful! *sigh* I can't help but feel sorry for Gamlin... Don't worry Gamlin, I still love you! *runs to him* -

Ja!

Courtney-chan

What's that all about? I only watched a few episodes of Macross 7, but I luved it... Plz tell me!

Wonderfully written! I always enjoy the confrontations between Gamlin and Basara about Mylene... _