ok great, and i love Doyle but you got one very important fact wrong. Doyle had green eyes. Very beuatiful, very lovely green eyes. Sorry but i had to point that out. Love the story.

I liked it,it's the first Buffy/Doyle fic I've read. Keep up the great writting.

I love B/D. It's so rare and so wonderful to find. This is an absolutely beautiful story.

Holy...crap! That was _amazing_! When you contacted me to beta for you, I thought you were just another of the mediocre writers out there (like myself) who are pretty good writers but nothing special. Then I read this. Your use of description was amazing, and I love the Buffy/Doyle thing! I now see the advantages of being a beta; I get to read the 3rd part before it comes out...Hee hee. Seriously, though, that was just awesome! Anya

Just another little note (I didn't want to take the time and trouble to put this in the story) for readers: That quote I used at the beginning was actually from a David Bowie song, or so I've been told. Thanks to the person who gave me that info; you know who you are! :)

very nice

that was really kewl

pretty surprised at the possibility of doyle and buff...hmm pretty good.

Very nicely written. I could imagine this scenario happening exactly the way you wrote it. Loved this: "But then I felt Allen's fingers at the buttons of my jeans and all thoughts left my head for quite some time..."

Just a quick note that I forgot to include in this story... the C/A kiss mentioned at the beginning is actually the kiss from "Parting Gifts" when Cordy is trying to give Angel the visions. Doyle just misinterpreted (sp?) it as something more than it was. Sorry 'bout that, guys! I really meant to include an author's note explaining that fact! :)