i love the setting of this story and how you have the same paragraph for both of their different sets of views. so cute!

The story could be longer and more talking init but it is good kep going on the storys :D

Hmm... a few spelling/grammar mistakes, a bit short, and the ending was kind of weird, but it was okay. I have no idea what the "together we can win" line was about, tho'. o.o;;

I'd say it's major problem is being too short. But it was a good try, and I have to agree with your other reviewers that it was very sweet. ^_^

Soooooo CUTE! Me LIKE lots! =)

GOOD

*grins*

Oooohh... Funny ending for a great fanfic! Awesome!

you need more loger...

Aaww so kawaii! I loved it. TAIORA ALL THE WAY!

Very sweet! And the ending-too good for words!

short but cute! i just love taiora!

Well that was weird. How do you fall asleep halfway during a kiss? Hmmm...some constructive criticism. There were a few spelling mistakes, every time someone different says something, make it a new line...anything else? Nope, not really. The story was kinda rushed, kinda cheesy, but it was Taiora! Who am I to complain? It was good.

Aww...that was sweet! A little short, but I liked it!