The story could be longer and more talking init but it is good kep going on the storys :D

Hmm... a few spelling/grammar mistakes, a bit short, and the ending was kind of weird, but it was okay. I have no idea what the "together we can win" line was about, tho'. o.o;;

I'd say it's major problem is being too short. But it was a good try, and I have to agree with your other reviewers that it was very sweet. ^_^

Soooooo CUTE! Me LIKE lots! =)

GOOD

*grins*

Oooohh..... Funny ending for a great fanfic! Awesome!

you need more loger...

Aaww so kawaii! I loved it. TAIORA ALL THE WAY!

Very sweet! And the ending-too good for words!

short but cute! i just love taiora!

Well that was weird. How do you fall asleep halfway during a kiss? Hmmm...some constructive criticism. There were a few spelling mistakes, every time someone different says something, make it a new line...anything else? Nope, not really. The story was kinda rushed, kinda cheesy, but it was Taiora! Who am I to complain? It was good.

Aww...that was sweet! A little short, but I liked it!