 xXxSakoyoAragoniRaveGirlxXx 2009-02-24 . chapter 1AW will you write more Ranma/Ryouga? I'll give you lemons to useXD jjkjk I loved it though there's not enough good stories like this one in this coupling |
 The Immortal Captain 2008-06-09 . chapter 1I simply love this story! It is so adorable the way you pace it, reiterating special person, and describing the childhood steps into love. It was totally brill! There simply are not enough Ryoga/Ranma fics out there. |
 Ikustizen 2008-04-26 . chapter 1Squee! I love RyougaxRanma! (Or reversed... Either way. >w |
 Twillight Bunny 2007-12-20 . chapter 1Sweet mother of @#$%$#%# this is BEAUTIFUL!
EXCELLENT JOB! |
 eishi 2007-10-22 . chapter 1You know, I've been searching for a proper RyogaRanma-fic forever. There are very few of those, and even if I manage to find one, it's not believable, or then Ranma is a girl just to get rid of the homosexual aspect. But now I think that I've finally found what I've been looking for -- this is a good RyogaRanma-fic, all right.
I loved your writing style: the second person usage is something that I'm usually not comfortable with, but here it was just perfect. The switch from childhood to the present is done nicely, and I like the contrast of the kisses; but most of all, I liked how you portrayed Ranma's thoughts on how Ryoga needs him as a guide to home. I can't think of a single thing that should be changed, since I didn't spot any grammar mistakes, typos or plot holes. I simply loved this.
Upon checking your profile I noticed that you're not actively writing anymore, but I really hope that you continue some time. The fan fiction world truly needs more good fics like this one! :) |
 AngsterGangster 2007-09-28 . chapter 1now that was awesome |
 Bear of avalon 2007-09-20 . chapter 1Very good. I must say I enjoyed that alot. It was very sweet with a wonderful nostalgic feeling to it. Well written. |
 fortunata 2007-05-07 . chapter 1that was utter sweetness. hey, *I* can die now! Wait...o_O
anyway, this was short but i love how the story is narrated, nice and unique point of view, makes it all the more sweeter. |
 Atashina 2007-03-23 . chapter 1So cute! You did an excellent job with this story. Not sure what else ta say...kyu...normally I would be adding a 'but' at this point but I can't find anything wrong with the story... |
 lovova 2006-10-01 . chapter 1Cute, I wish that was how it had happened...eh, what can ya do ^^? |
 Dragon Fairies 2006-07-23 . chapter 1DFF: We! I'm on cloud nine. *Floating in the pink bubbly stuff you see during fluffy moments*
DIF: *Slaps fore head* How'd we ever get stuck with you? Great Fic. Hope you keep it up.
Wonton: *In the same place as Fire* Oh the cuteness. *bumps into Fire* Ah get the perv away from me.
DFF: *hopelessly ignorant.* You need to write more.
Randa: This story is absolutly lovely. Keep up the good work. |
 rry 2006-07-06 . chapter 1it's so CUTE!! it's cute-ness overflows and enfects us all (in a good way of course)! it's really adorable how you had Ranma love confetion go. ^^ |
 greetings from lalaland 2006-05-25 . chapter 1 aw!! it's so cute! |
 Kaxlya 2006-05-19 . chapter 1^^ Yay! I only recently got into this pairing, and I love it! (I've been wondering for a while if it would be concidered yaoi/shonen-ai Because Ranma turns into a girl...) |
 RC 2005-11-19 . chapter 1 SQUEE, Adorable! |