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xXxSakoyoAragoniRaveGirlxXx
2009-02-24 . chapter 1
AW will you write more Ranma/Ryouga? I'll give you lemons to useXD jjkjk I loved it though there's not enough good stories like this one in this coupling
The Immortal Captain
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
I simply love this story! It is so adorable the way you pace it, reiterating special person, and describing the childhood steps into love. It was totally brill! There simply are not enough Ryoga/Ranma fics out there.
Ikustizen
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
Squee! I love RyougaxRanma! (Or reversed... Either way. >w
Twillight Bunny
2007-12-20 . chapter 1
Sweet mother of @#$%$#%# this is BEAUTIFUL!
EXCELLENT JOB!
eishi
2007-10-22 . chapter 1
You know, I've been searching for a proper RyogaRanma-fic forever. There are very few of those, and even if I manage to find one, it's not believable, or then Ranma is a girl just to get rid of the homosexual aspect. But now I think that I've finally found what I've been looking for -- this is a good RyogaRanma-fic, all right.

I loved your writing style: the second person usage is something that I'm usually not comfortable with, but here it was just perfect. The switch from childhood to the present is done nicely, and I like the contrast of the kisses; but most of all, I liked how you portrayed Ranma's thoughts on how Ryoga needs him as a guide to home. I can't think of a single thing that should be changed, since I didn't spot any grammar mistakes, typos or plot holes. I simply loved this.

Upon checking your profile I noticed that you're not actively writing anymore, but I really hope that you continue some time. The fan fiction world truly needs more good fics like this one! :)
AngsterGangster
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
now that was awesome
Bear of avalon
2007-09-20 . chapter 1
Very good. I must say I enjoyed that alot. It was very sweet with a wonderful nostalgic feeling to it. Well written.
fortunata
2007-05-07 . chapter 1
that was utter sweetness. hey, *I* can die now! Wait...o_O

anyway, this was short but i love how the story is narrated, nice and unique point of view, makes it all the more sweeter.
Atashina
2007-03-23 . chapter 1
So cute! You did an excellent job with this story. Not sure what else ta say...kyu...normally I would be adding a 'but' at this point but I can't find anything wrong with the story...
lovova
2006-10-01 . chapter 1
Cute, I wish that was how it had happened...eh, what can ya do ^^?
Dragon Fairies
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
DFF: We! I'm on cloud nine. *Floating in the pink bubbly stuff you see during fluffy moments*

DIF: *Slaps fore head* How'd we ever get stuck with you? Great Fic. Hope you keep it up.

Wonton: *In the same place as Fire* Oh the cuteness. *bumps into Fire* Ah get the perv away from me.

DFF: *hopelessly ignorant.* You need to write more.

Randa: This story is absolutly lovely. Keep up the good work.
rry
2006-07-06 . chapter 1
it's so CUTE!! it's cute-ness overflows and enfects us all (in a good way of course)! it's really adorable how you had Ranma love confetion go. ^^
greetings from lalaland
2006-05-25 . chapter 1
aw!! it's so cute!
Kaxlya
2006-05-19 . chapter 1
^^ Yay! I only recently got into this pairing, and I love it! (I've been wondering for a while if it would be concidered yaoi/shonen-ai Because Ranma turns into a girl...)
RC
2005-11-19 . chapter 1
SQUEE, Adorable!
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