what that was the end? not cool

I LOVED YOU'R STORY AND I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE THIS STORY SOON BECOUSE I DON'T KNOW IF I CAN WEAT THAT LONG. AND TO THE ONE THAT HAVE NOT READ THIS YAT THIN MY I SAY THAT YOU ARE MISSING ONE HELL OF A GOD STORY.

(AND MY I SAY TO THE ONE'S THAT DON'T LIKE THIN YOU DON'T KNOW A GOOD STORY THIN.) (I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE GOOD STORY'S SOON.)

it was really good and i am gonna go read the rest of it.

oh my! what an absolutely singularly unique story!a marvelous piece of work if i do say so myself! i look forward to further updates of your fic and i do hope you will update soon!

more please this is good

oh sess is gonna get beatz! lmao jkz

Heh.. I just realized I have a bad memory. I couldnt remember what happened and sorta had to reread the entire fic... ...backwards. 0.o I had to go back and read what happened before the chapter I was reading, and.. uh.. yeah.. *blink* Anyway, I feel like smacking Sesshoumaru with his furry pelt and then stealing it. And if it's a tail, I'll yank on it and *then* steal it. Er.. is that possible? Hm.. Maybe I would just chop it off and- *blink* Uh. Would that be counted as animal cruelty? @.@ Um. Right. The fic. Heh.. I noticed one particular line of the chapter.. "He had always supposed she held feeling for his brother, not a mere peasant boy. At least InuYasha was royalty!" Okay, maybe that was two. 0.o Anyway, that line was cute because it showed that he felt that the "peasant boy" wasnt good enough for Kagome. AW.. Ha.. Okie dokay. That was a short chapter, not a lot to comment on, but whatevers.. Erm.. since you're kinda stuck, I wont hurry you to update soon. So.. Just.. good luck on ALL your writing. XD

The shortness is overwhelming. Die.

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Please, update soon!

This was really short :). Oh well, be waiting for the next installment!

kittymui

Ooh, that was very mean... very mean indeed. Perhaps you could UPDATE and put my thoughts to rest, anyways, good story! Update before I among dozens of other readers throw hissy fits.

Keep it up!

Buddha 0_o

Great chapter. Keep up the good work and update soon!

no! come on plz update! it was gettin good! and u just HAD 2 end it huh? just 2 be mean, well fine then but update soon!

love it update soon

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I love this!