 starfish saver 7/20/07 . chapter 1hey
wow. that was beautiful. really nice. and true to the characters, i think.
like a cat.
bahahahahaha.
sarah xoxo |
 xinyan 3/6/05 . chapter 1 wonderful story
looking forward to more works about those 2 guys:) |
 SKSuncloud 2/28/05 . chapter 1_ that's so cute! Wow...You do Lucius/Raven really well! You're a very good author! Please write more! I really want to know what happens next! |
 Amethyst Bubble 2/28/05 . chapter 1Aww, that was sweet. It made me smile. It's great to see some more of your writing up! Keep up the good work, okay?
*Ammy |
 Sara Jaye 2/28/05 . chapter 1Aww! That was so sweet! Especially love the image of Raven with his head in Lucius's lap.
Keep it up! You have some real talent here! |
 Shadows of the Fairies 2/28/05 . chapter 1*squees* Aw, how cute! _ *snugs Raven and Lucius* They just make the perfect couple, yesh they do. o_o; *kicks Serra and Rebecca* Heehee, please write more RxL fics! I can't get enough of 'em! x3 |
 Koriku 2/28/05 . chapter 1Ohmigosh. That was so sweet. *hugs fanfic* Fluff. Very pretty fluff. Omg, I love your Fire Emblem fics so much... @_@
Do you usually, like, edit your fics a couple times before posting them...? As awesome as this fic is, you kept jumping between past and present tense... The story is so nice and fluffy, though, that the little grammatical errors barely hinder it XD
I'd be a good reviewer and tell you what the best particularly good parts of this story are, but I can't really pick one. o_o The ending is really sappy XD Not that that's a bad thing. Yay sap! |