| Reviews for My Fragile Mortality |
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Rexnos 11/29/12 . chapter 2I've read a lot of Naruto fan fiction, but I don't think I've ever seen this ship. The age gap is a little weird, but I can appreciate anything that makes Hinata suffer less. It's funny that I like her character and hate it at the same time. I like how something as simple as the neglect and disdain of her father has turned her into such a timid girl. I dislike how she seems to just let it all happen. In summary, she seems very realistic and I just dislike that reality. Later, Rex |
woodlandfairykirk 11/6/12 . chapter 2love this(: |
signifytheworld 8/11/12 . chapter 2I love this coupleeee (: It is so adorable! And your writing is ahmazing... This was a great two-shot |
yume824 3/5/12 . chapter 2I must say that I enjoyed the epilogue more than the original oneshot, but that's just my opinion. I can say, however, that I liked it overall. I like how Hinata has grown up and isn't quite as shy as before and Itachi can never be better. He's always awesome so it's an automatically added bonus. Here it is, short and sweet: cute and a bit of an adrenaline rush all packed into a twoshot. Bravo! yume824 |
Luka 12/31/11 . chapter 1 two words awe-some! |
Pumpkin bells 6/30/11 . chapter 2I liked it sooo , badly! I won't demand a sequel, but I'd love one, for sure! :3 |
Pumpkin bells 6/30/11 . chapter 1That was amazing! I just loved the last sentence! And little Hinata was so cute and wise, adorable! I really thoght you wrote it wonderfully. Itacho was too cool for me to handle him...joking |
harley944 1/5/11 . chapter 2good story |
shadow of the lost 8/10/10 . chapter 2gotta love me some itahina! |
realityfling18 5/20/09 . chapter 1awesome!XD |
Darth-Taisha 4/4/09 . chapter 2Nice job, I really liked it. |
Apple Of The Sand 1/13/09 . chapter 2Wow! This is an amazingly written fic! XD I'm a little disappointed that you don't want to continue, but I suppose that's your right. Anyway, I was really inspired by reading this! |
WhiteDemoness11 4/23/08 . chapter 2Well done. Not a happy ending, not a sad ending, just a 'they met up and went on with their lives.' And all rather IC. *claps* |
Haruka2007 4/13/08 . chapter 2aaww man i wana know what happens next! plz write more :D XD |
Aufera 3/23/08 . chapter 2Now I can finally say that I've found and read two good ItaHina ficlets! :) |