FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Mexwojo 2008-09-13 ch 17,  | abuseThis is the most lovely story about WoJo kids! With the little girl's point of view, so much like Jordan's would be as a kid. As a happy kid, that is. She´s fond of science and Nigel's parafernalia, just great. And dragging her brother and friends to a dangerous play, like her mom. Oh, that was amazing! (a little bit of Nancy Drew, too) Great work! |
| xoRetributionox 2005-05-09 ch 17, | abuseOh! Great chapter! Andy is quite like her mom I think. Is this the end of the story? |
| jtbwriter 2005-05-06 ch 17, | abuseThat is such a great story-I love that Andy got it-sort of! Her reaction to being hugged-funny-very Jordan! Thanks for a very involving story-hope to see more! |
| cbratter 2005-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the story. But, I keep wondering why these kids are wandering all over the place alone, 10 years old is really young for having so little supervision after school. |
| jtbwriter 2005-05-01 ch 16, | abuseGood update-Andy gets the right punishment... except somebody needs to tell her why, that she is loved and that all her parents want to do is keep her safe. Maybe Max needs to let her know that-but I really think Jordan and Woody should tell their daughter-before she pulls a Jordan! Great story-thanks-but now what?:) |
| xoRetributionox 2005-04-29 ch 15, | abuseLol...Like father/mother, like daughter is definitely, definitely true here. Love it and can't wait for more. |
| jtbwriter 2005-04-29 ch 15, | abuseThat was good-Andy is such a chip off the old...well, you know! And wait until Jordan finds out...! Very cute-I like her reactions-hope she realizes how much she's loved and that's why Woody went off! Great fic-thanks! Now what does Andy pull next?:) |
| D. Lerious 2005-04-29 ch 15, | abuseIt's cute to see her play sleuth! aw:) I glad that she helped solve the case! |
| xoRetributionox 2005-04-25 ch 13, | abuseOh...it's good! I didn't like it as much at first, but now I really do. Can't wait for more. |
| D. Lerious 2005-04-21 ch 12, | abuse? hm wonder where this is going? |
| D. Lerious 2005-04-20 ch 10, | abusehow sweet! |
| Kimmers 2005-04-19 ch 9, | abuseLove this so much this is brillant. |
| Village Voice 2005-04-15 ch 8, | abuseIt's really good, but I have a few little pointers. From the text, I think that you meant 'of course' not 'of cause.' Also when you wrote 'The first weeks of his live...' I think you meant 'The first few weeks of his life...' |
| D. Lerious 2005-04-15 ch 8, | abusehow sweet! |
| Kimmers 2005-04-11 ch 7, | abuseLoved this so much sweets, you did a great job with it can't wait for more |