Maria's dream was cool. I'm a little slow though- it took me a while to catch on. ^__^
It was nice to see your interpretation of Toudou, too. I never really thought about how he was introduced to SOLOMON. I've always wondered about his relationship to Zaizen, though. The update was great! :D

Sorry, too lazy to log in, but yes, another great chapter. I think it's really cool how you're developing Toudou's and Maria's characters. Can't wait for the next update. Later!

Wow, Maria's cool! Please continue, this is getting so interesting!

I love how strong and vibrant you've made Maria! Nifty way of handling the the telekinetic descriptions, and a mysterious baddie to keep us reading. Off to a great start, plated!

Awesome! Everything was nice and original- from Maria's craft, to her character itself. Her slight social/status problem at work reminds me of Robin's at the beginning of the series. I'm really not sure what to think of that old lady . . .
I can't wait to read the rest. Happy writing and good luck! ^_^

I *love* maria's power. And I even more like the description you put into it!
Only 14,811 words to go! You can DO it! (and if my math is wrong, you can smack me.)

Too lazy to log in. I thought it was really good. That's a freakin' awsome craft you gave Maria too. I never would have expected that. I think you've woven a finally crafted story, and I can't wait for more.