i like it. i think you should continue.

Well it looks like this has promice to be quite a good story. Please update this soon!
I'm sure you can find facts about the story's and mthir locationas an all other info on the internet. Google is your friend.

Pretty cool. I like the idea of JP and TLW's survivors meeting up to go on this mysterious trip. Looking forward to more!

You have good dialogue. The scene where they gentlemen listen to what happened to the man from the prologue...that's great. I love the idea that they HEARD what happened without actually seeing it. And great idea mentioning how Hardner gave Dodgson the wrong info when him, Howard King and George Baselton went to Isla Sorna. I remember Malcolm saying they were mistaken when they froze in front of the T-Rex. Anyway...don't worry about writing like Michael Crichton. Write as yourself-you have a short, but intriguing fic. Stick to your own writer's voice, you'll do fine!

Very creepy prologue. I wonder if you're going to reveal who the man that was killed later on in your fic. I thought of two dinos: dilophosaur and velociraptors that could've done this. Good job!

Personally, I don't really like this story in the least. I know you're getting good reviews and such, but most of those simply are trying to be nice. I encourage you to keep writing and don't mean for this review to be hurtful. I think your potentional is promising. Just avoid being predictable, and while writing like Crichton is good, copying him word for word isn't.

Wow... this sounds like its going to be really good! I hope to hear more soon, I love how you stuck the the books and not the movies

Very nice! I'm new, so this is my first review...and I don't have any critics, because I like your kind of write...
Keep Your good work, and I'm looking forward to the dinos...

Oh, sounds interesting. You may be in a slump, but update as soon as you can, pleasE? I wanna know where this is going.

I like your writing style and the dialogue seems great so far :D Keep it up

this story sounds interesting. update soon! ^_^

I really need to correct my habit of not reviewing things I like. I like this so far, even though there isn't much of it. Creepy and descriptive. Please continue. *waits for an update*

This is really good. Total Crichton imitate!! In the best way possible. I, too, wish you would continue.
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DUDE!

Bob this is one of my fav stories u have posted i thought i wouldnt like it but i do. You have to hurry and do more please if you do i will do more to Their Love Story

I want to know what happens next so please up date and its not like you to do short things even if it is a prologue anyway never mind that please hurry with the next chapter

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Francis