Okay, so this is an old story, and undoubtedly smarter people than I have already been here and left far more intelligent comments than I ever could.

But, damn. A roadside diner and empty stands and watching a running ghost. It's so beautiful and dreamy and visual and every word is measured and perfect. Damn.

I love the way you've worked in believable dialogue with such lovely description, and your careful hand with the characters (four years down the track, I think the characterization still holds true). Thank you.

Beautifully written story. I loved it!

Wow I love your style of writing. It isn't too wordy, yet you've managed to capture the right emotions. I thoroughly enjoy House's characterization. I love his words at the end of the chapter.

Very nice!

Wow I really loved this vignette. It truly felt like I was eavesdropping on a playfully intimate conversation between them. And Hemingway would *totally* be House's fave author!

Here's what you need to do - mail this to David Shore and all the writers on House, with a note attached that reads:

THIS is House/Cameron. THIS is romance. THIS is what Screenplays should be.

THIS is how you turn characters into people, imagination in reality, lust in love.

This is art.

- IvoryAlchemist

I just read this story straight through. It's completely beautiful. The whole thing is marvelous and amazing and puts me in a different mood. Probably the best House fic ever.

I'm totally loving ur ff, please tell me it didn't end here!?!?

BeeBee

Absolutely lovely. Your writing style is fantastic.

There’s not much I can say. You are a marvel. Thank you.

D: You haven't updated for a while...but that's okay, because this is the best Cameron/House story I've ever read! If I didn't like the pairing before, I'd love it now. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Nice work really liked this fic.

One word. Wow.

This is the best fan fic I have ever read..PERIOD! No joke.

Nothing else I have ever read compares to this House/Cameron story. I'm so blown away by your talent that I can't even formulate a good review. How about, I love it, It's my favorite fic of all time, and I will probably read it another 5 times?
I don't even think those comments can even do this wonderful masterpiece the justice it deserves.

I would really love to see you continue with this but it's fantastic the way it is. I applaud you for a fantastic job well done. :)

This was...so...SO amazing. That's...really all I can bring myself to say. You came closer than anyone else with Cameron and House. They were nearly spot-on, and I'm picky. I absolutely loathe it when people take them having no idea what they're doing. But this fic was beautiful. I was heartbroken to realize you wrote it in 2005, but I hope there's some hope you could return. I hope to see more. This really was amazing.