This was absolutely wonderful! I hope you write many more James/Lilly soon!

Loved the first chapter the most, although the second was still really good. The second made me a bit sad but also made me a bit happy. Great job.

Peace. Love. Pringles.

Jenn

I just noticed how fitting the title is. I love that the Marauders were in the room, and their reactions to Lily and James kissing. Classic.

Cheers and happy writing!

J'ADORE! This is amazing, loved the first one, loved the second one! Write more ? Hehehe

Emily

AWWWWWWWWW! that's so sad but cute! you should add on to this story

i love your story! you should continue it .

i love your story! you should continue it .

Really enjoyable. Please keep writing more H/G and J/L fics as they're my equal favourite cannon pairings, then R/Hr. Well done.

AWH

I am already in love with this story and it's only 2 chapters in! 33

I wish there was another chapter, I really liked it. :D

this shouldnt be so short the chapters are so good! i know you stopped but you should keep picking away at it and make it bigger! this story is awesome!

Whoa. That was... There's only one word for that:

AWWWWWWWW!

Thanks for sharing!:)

I really really liked this. I loved the Lily/James interaction, but also the Lily/Severus conversation. A lot of the times (at least in the stories I've read) his reaction is either left out, or his part over played. You had a nice balance. )

So there was this utterly embarassing moment around here:

'In the corner, Remus was doing everything he could to muzzle Sirius,'

where I misread muzzle as nuzzle and was thoroughly shocked.

In fact my reaction was along the sorts of:

Me: -reading- Awww...that's so - WHAT THE HELL! WHEN DID THIS TURN INTO A BLOODY REMUS/SIRIUS FIC!

Because, you know, I was looking for a big dose of Lily/James. AND I GOT IT!

I love this story very, very, very much :)

I liked these one shots! :)