You know I first started reading this story in 2002, as a sophomore in highschool. Eight years later, and having graduated from college, I STILL check back in hopes you've updated...still one of the few great tomb raider stories around!

who is David Connors anway? Disclaimers generally help tell people that

Oh man, you updated! Hoo-ra! hehe, yes! Sorry, can't think of any other excited person exclamations that can be made. I liked this chapter lots of course. hehehe, I just love the banter between Lara and David, it's so great how you do it. David's funny too. Hehe, "Sitting Bull!" lol, I loved that one. and then he proposed to Lara! Aw, how sweet. I love this story of yours with David and Lara, so damn cute. hahaha, she's kinky too. sweet. I liked that David got to have a family, I mean, how he contemplates it in the end is kind of endearing. hehe, and the end, is just cute. Awesome chapter. So glad to read it, yay! err, ok. so there will be more to come sometime? :)

as awesome as the whole rest of the stary has been! i can't wait for the next update!

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Ha-ha! Yay! Well, *ahem*, all of this was just absolutely fantastic! I read straight up to 5:00 a.m. to just barely get close to finishing up reading it. I like Lara/David, David mostly as her choice of companion, the way that you wrote/made him? It's not so mushy and I don't know, it's just great. They're a funny couple and their adventures together...the stories are well-written. Can't wait for ch. 28!

Awesome! i love it.

you're a really good writer.

! Amazing! I don't know what else to say really, what words could do justice. This is so great, has anyone ever told you that? Ha. I loved the Shiva story, if I may call it that. And the second part...so awesome! I felt bad for Dimitri though, in the end. The dialogue and interaction between David and Lara is the best, I really love your sense of humor, how well it is written and your writing style. I had thought that I'd already read much of this but found out that I am now only up to chapter 9, but I look forward to the rest!

Let me just say; wow. It's been too long since I've read this story. The new chapters were fabulous. I absolutely loved Achilles' Heel. It was so hilarious that Pearl had to come in see why I was laughing hard. It was a real reminder of why I adore your writing so much. Keep up the awesome work, I can't wait until you update again. -Mblow0t5

And into the new arc we go, and man talk about a set-up and bad postion both heroes are in. Whats even worse is that Lara's newfound temper at the moment is what about to make David demise at lot less exaggerated. And what of Badger and Bloodwing? One, if not both, is leading the two along. I see a real "who can you trust" case is about to go down. Can't wait for the next chapter.

good chapter, things are not looking good for daivid.

I like the story. I hope you update soon. I take it was not the last chapter.

I can't be bothered to do anything but dip into this as it is so long, but the bits I read seemed OK. Therefore I shouldn't really leave any review although it is nice to see one of the founders of TR fan fiction still plugging away at it :)

that was great. very very good. like all of ur writing. waiting for more! lara would make a good Xena, she's crazy and strong! lol!

HAHA! Excellent climax and ending to this story arc, Mage. I swear I always love uptight villans like Jack, think there on top of the world, above the law and better then everybody. Just make it more fitting when they realize the one small error in their plans that proves to be their undoing. Needless to say, the best laid plans always go awry. Well I say this make Dave even for Lara saving him in the last adventure. But whats next for our always trobule-attracting duo. Catch ya in the next chapter dude!

wtf? that was freaky. ok waiting for more. i'm hooked again!